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Comment from Sararb
You did a great job with this one. This is a new style to me, but I really enjoyed reading it. I will have to attempt this sometime. Your poem flowed well, and described the things of nature. As an animal lover i always enjoy the poems about animals. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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You did a great job with this one. This is a new style to me, but I really enjoyed reading it. I will have to attempt this sometime. Your poem flowed well, and described the things of nature. As an animal lover i always enjoy the poems about animals. Sararb :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you Sara. Me too!
Comment from mshirachot
What I liked best about this poem was the internal rhyming in the second lines. Even with Cuddly - if pronounced in three syllables "cud-doll-lee" as it is here in my neck of the woods, it even rhymes with "loyal" --- loosely!
Nice job!
Blessings!
Marsha
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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What I liked best about this poem was the internal rhyming in the second lines. Even with Cuddly - if pronounced in three syllables "cud-doll-lee" as it is here in my neck of the woods, it even rhymes with "loyal" --- loosely!
Nice job!
Blessings!
Marsha
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thanks Marshs, great you got that. I meant it as a near rhyme. Although were pronounce it with two syllables like - ku dull.
Comment from Indie Skreet
well Tom, I hate cats and love dogs. Well, you might know that from your reads of mine - I have always gone for dogs and that's a fact lol. So I will mark you for content regardless of the spiteful cat one cannot trust :) best Indie xx
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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well Tom, I hate cats and love dogs. Well, you might know that from your reads of mine - I have always gone for dogs and that's a fact lol. So I will mark you for content regardless of the spiteful cat one cannot trust :) best Indie xx
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thanks Indie. I not crazy about cats, OK on a short term basis. I really love dogs too! There was a puppy in there. LOL.
Comment from 9999pool
Good Parallelogram using the feline as nature's glow of love and warmth. She purrs, soft fur and remind us of sweet kisses too. Her eyes like a deer and perfectly clear and she spoke through them it appeared.
Good write and expressed the true nature of cats very well and the love they radiate to us.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Good Parallelogram using the feline as nature's glow of love and warmth. She purrs, soft fur and remind us of sweet kisses too. Her eyes like a deer and perfectly clear and she spoke through them it appeared.
Good write and expressed the true nature of cats very well and the love they radiate to us.
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you Ritchie.
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Welcome Tom, cheers.
You might want to take a look at my new "Poetry Writing Prompt" about wabi-sabi?
Cheerio, Ritchie.
Comment from NHazelwood
Your poem was written so creatively and you truly described the beauty that love brings with the lovely imagery of nature! Well penned!
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Your poem was written so creatively and you truly described the beauty that love brings with the lovely imagery of nature! Well penned!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thank you NHazelwood.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Clever verse using four different animals to compare with your pet. Well
constructed format with an easy flow through out. Enjoyable read,
Great picture you added from your collection. Well done. Robin :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Clever verse using four different animals to compare with your pet. Well
constructed format with an easy flow through out. Enjoyable read,
Great picture you added from your collection. Well done. Robin :)
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thanks Robin. Didn't have a picture of a kitten.
Comment from mikenbel
In line 1 of stanza two did you intend for "me" or "my"? Thank you for the education in this form of poetry. I had to go back to really appreciate the author's notes that you included. Thank you.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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In line 1 of stanza two did you intend for "me" or "my"? Thank you for the education in this form of poetry. I had to go back to really appreciate the author's notes that you included. Thank you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Yes I did mean me, thanks, I fixed that.
Comment from Gungalo
Pussy cat.
Soft fur you pet, she purrs.
Soft sweet kisses, she really likes that!
A very good effort at the style Tom. Though I'm sure she had a different thing of nature in mind. LOL. Coming from a zoo isn't natural. Heheh but, so what right?
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Pussy cat.
Soft fur you pet, she purrs.
Soft sweet kisses, she really likes that!
A very good effort at the style Tom. Though I'm sure she had a different thing of nature in mind. LOL. Coming from a zoo isn't natural. Heheh but, so what right?
Comment Written 17-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2013
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Thanks Gungalo. My next one will Have stars, trees and mountains, maybe.
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LOL.
