Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "Bursting Forth"Small and Specialty Poems
7 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
That came out great. All your words flowed together just like the start of Spring in bloom. Nice work. Excellent.
The photograph looks like a sprigs of mint, however, it does match the poem well. Great!
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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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That came out great. All your words flowed together just like the start of Spring in bloom. Nice work. Excellent.
The photograph looks like a sprigs of mint, however, it does match the poem well. Great!
glitter-graphics.com
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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Thank you Sunnilicious . You have a great one too.
Comment from Sararb
I love your poem about the signs of spring, and the renewal of all the trees and life. It is exciting to see the bare trees and plants come to life again with new growth. Sararb :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I love your poem about the signs of spring, and the renewal of all the trees and life. It is exciting to see the bare trees and plants come to life again with new growth. Sararb :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Barb. It is such a joy. Not quite there yet his season, but I do see the buds now.
Comment from Gungalo
Awesome form isn't it Tom. You have done it beautifully and the words are just so wonderful. A real accomplishment to the format. Great photo!!!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Awesome form isn't it Tom. You have done it beautifully and the words are just so wonderful. A real accomplishment to the format. Great photo!!!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Gungalo, another inspirational prod from you, my master.
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Smile.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Such a nice easy flow without stumbles. Delightful message
that presents the feeling of the buds bursting forth. Great picture
and presentation. Love the color combination. Robin :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Such a nice easy flow without stumbles. Delightful message
that presents the feeling of the buds bursting forth. Great picture
and presentation. Love the color combination. Robin :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Robin, not quite there yet this season, but I see the buds coming.
Comment from Indie Skreet
okay, you've got me here. I hate nature poems but I love this and would really give you a six if i possessed one. This is an exquisite write Tom, so thank you for the pleasure :) best Indie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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okay, you've got me here. I hate nature poems but I love this and would really give you a six if i possessed one. This is an exquisite write Tom, so thank you for the pleasure :) best Indie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Hi Indie. Glad I could move you out of your comfort zone. Nature is my religion. Smiles. Tom.
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lol Tom - can you guess what mine is?
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Scrabble?
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Poetry?
Comment from Janice Canerdy
I enjoyed this exuberant poem about the new life engendered by spring (which has not yet sprung in most areas!). I realize that repetition can be very effective, but in a poem so short, I don't think I'd use a word twice (just an opinion, of course, as is much of what we say in our reviews).
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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I enjoyed this exuberant poem about the new life engendered by spring (which has not yet sprung in most areas!). I realize that repetition can be very effective, but in a poem so short, I don't think I'd use a word twice (just an opinion, of course, as is much of what we say in our reviews).
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Janice. You are so right, I changed one "bursts" to "comes". I appreciate you pointing that out to improve it. Cheers! Tom.
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What a nice reply! I'm so glad to know I helped. Janice
Comment from Maureen's Pen
It just makes the heart smile when we notice the first leaves unfurling. Mine haven't yet - but I can hear bird songs in full spring command of re-birth.
I enjoyed this lovely work, not only did it make me smile you pen with skill much like those leaves unfurling. Excellent poem. Thanks so much for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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It just makes the heart smile when we notice the first leaves unfurling. Mine haven't yet - but I can hear bird songs in full spring command of re-birth.
I enjoyed this lovely work, not only did it make me smile you pen with skill much like those leaves unfurling. Excellent poem. Thanks so much for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Maureen. I appreciate this morning visit and your encouraging comments. Have a wonderful day! Tom
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You too my friend!
Hugs
Maureen
