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Wishes that I forgot to fulfill
2 total reviews
Comment from
angelmagnet
oops! Only six syllables in your second line. I think, for a 575 poetry contest, you should adhere to the most basic contest rules. Your poem is promising and maybe just needs revising. Maybe the second line could be "I hide my wishes up there." Good luck
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
Thank you, Mam'. I have made that correction.
Comment from
Indie Skreet
good little 5-7-5 and i wish you luck for the competition ..................................................................Indie
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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