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Little Poems

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Small and Specialty Poems

5 total reviews 
Comment from Sararb
Exceptional
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Wow! Agreat poem that you wrote while playing Scrabble with your daughter, Scrabble happens to be one of my favorite things to play. This was such an original that I have to award you six stars. Sararb :)

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
    Thank you Sararb, Glad you like it and enjoy the Game. Thank you for the fabulous rating.
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
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Aloha Trischel,
What a great idea this is very creative. I love it. I'll have to give it a try. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2013
    Thank you Ginger. You gals are stirring things up. Your Hawaueku and Indie's Scrabble poem. Party on!
Comment from Robin Gilmor
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Completely a fun verse that is played out with the game of scrabble. Very clever in you word choices that add to the verse. I never would have thought of this
approach to poetry. Sunny smiles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    Thank you Robin. The credit really goes to Indie Skreet. She invented the idea. I reviewed three of hers. It is a fun format.
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
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This is adorable! I have really been enjoying Indie's Scrabble series as well. I think that after she finishes her book it would be fun for someone to post it as a writing prompt in tribute to her. :) True? Hide your shoes add an extra three foot to your yard's fence, and enjoy your sheppard! :)

*shepherd?
misspelling intentional?... If so it is misspelled two different way in the art and in the poem, so maybe you want to make them match?

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    Thanks Gypsy. I matched them up since I can't change the artwork.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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lol, I should one you as I own the copyright! I'll let you off this time though, cos you did a good job ....... don't push your luck though mate - Only one scrabble champ on fanstory lol, Indiesputably bitter xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    Thanks Indie. Thought I'd try this new thing. But you are the champ.
reply by Indie Skreet on 01-Apr-2013
    lol, you know I am only messing, right! :D
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    Wasn't positive. Now I'm good.
reply by Indie Skreet on 01-Apr-2013
    lol, sorry - I can't resist a leg-pull when one is so easily set up :)
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2013
    Great cos I got some others excited about your format. One said we should do a tribute to you for inventing it, Another said we should do a prompt.
reply by Indie Skreet on 01-Apr-2013
    really! well that is a generous idea - a big thank you in that case and I won't sue lol