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Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Treishel,
Yes, you are right never pass up a kiss. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
Aloha Treishel,
Yes, you are right never pass up a kiss. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Have a blessed day.
Aloha, Ginger Hawaiian Mermaid
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thank you Ginger. Kiss away!
Comment from Gypsy Starchild
heats my soul
burns moments into memories
This line is wonderful... this whole poem is fabulous, it reads beautifully both silently and aloud. Splendidly romantic. :) Your choice of art and layout compliment the poem perfectly.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
heats my soul
burns moments into memories
This line is wonderful... this whole poem is fabulous, it reads beautifully both silently and aloud. Splendidly romantic. :) Your choice of art and layout compliment the poem perfectly.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013
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Thank you Gypsy Starchild. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Always love and kiss the one you love and often. A good
message, well scripted and enjoyed. A lovely sentiment shared
by many. thank you for the message. Smiles. Robin :)
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
Always love and kiss the one you love and often. A good
message, well scripted and enjoyed. A lovely sentiment shared
by many. thank you for the message. Smiles. Robin :)
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thanks Robin. Thought I'd try a cameo.
Comment from atlas-manoftherain
burns moments into memories" I loved this line the most. A nice succinct poem. I shall try to keep in mind your advice in the author's notes as well. Write on.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
burns moments into memories" I loved this line the most. A nice succinct poem. I shall try to keep in mind your advice in the author's notes as well. Write on.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you atlas-manoftherain. Good idea.
Comment from Gungalo
Very good Treischel and a beautiful write. So great your words in this one guy, What a beautiful Cameo you have drawn for us.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
Very good Treischel and a beautiful write. So great your words in this one guy, What a beautiful Cameo you have drawn for us.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you Gungalo. I had a fabulous teacher. You! Your beautiful love poetry is inspiring.
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Thanks so very much Treischel.
Comment from Indie Skreet
beautifully written and a loving message - depends who's doing the kissing of course, I have one I would prefer to another :) best Indie 'xx'
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
beautifully written and a loving message - depends who's doing the kissing of course, I have one I would prefer to another :) best Indie 'xx'
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you Indie. Good point!