Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Nice verse of your trip and adventure and the joy of once again returning home.
It's always a pleasure to return to your own bed. An enjoyable story.
Smiles. Robin :)

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013

Thank you Robin, Vegas is such a fairy tale in stone and glass. Everywhere I looked was candy for my camera.

reply by Robin Gilmor on 26-Mar-2013

I enjoy your pictures so much. Have miss them of late! You have inspired me. ATTENTION: old woman in isle two taking pictures of fruits
with I-Phone

Comment from Nottoway

Excellent

Excellent again. Great presentation of the joy and fatigue of travel and the ultimate joy and comfort of home. Whether it is away for a few days, a few weeks or a few years, home is so peaceful.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013

Thank you Nottoway. Yes, you definitely have it.

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

You went Vegas already. That seems like a sort trip. Hope you sons lots of money to shop and eat 5-star or whatever it is that you enjoy. I heard they have plenty live shows there.

Well, good poem. Nicely penned. Great!

Glad you had a fun time and made it back safe :)

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013

Thank you sunnilicious. Vegas is an amazing place where dreams are big. It's a place a guy with a camera can't get enough. Think I lost all of $30 gambling.

reply by sunnilicious on 25-Mar-2013

Photography in Las Vegas... wild!

Comment from Rmocruz

Excellent

I am going to presume that "chinquain suite" means five line stanzas
in assemblage?
This personal account story in a poem is interesting and entertaining.
Poetically presented effectively employing metaphors.

An enjoyable brief read.
Rich.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013

Thank you Rich. Yes, a group of interlinked Cinquains. Six seperate Cinquains that tell a story.

reply by Rmocruz on 25-Mar-2013

You're welcome Treichel.
Thanks for the info.

Rich.

Comment from Patricia1

Excellent

Nicely done! I like the descriptions and visuals from the time on the plane to destinations and then the moment of readiness to get back home. It's usually fun to plan and look forward to trips but after being away from home awhile, it's nice to get back home and into our "comforts" we enjoy there. Good job!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013

Thank you Patricia. Yes, fun to go, and great to be back.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

beautiful written poem, providing a lot of imagery through such a short verse. you did a splendid job.
favourite cverse....


I rode
Upon metal
Wings that soon swiftly strode
Marshmallow clouds, then to settle
Back down

I hope you had fun traveling

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013

Thanks Tia. I did.