Comment from J.R.Brown

Good

This is a beautiful soul mate filled poem with a perfect count to each phrase. Love the way its diagram looks too
The story of a near40 year love hits the 5 star and the poem hits the four cuz im a tough critic for the 5,6mark! Good art!

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 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

Thank you J.R.Brown. I appreciate you being a tough critic, although there's no indication of points to improve within this review.

reply by J.R.Brown on 29-Mar-2013

I don't want to point out any correction on something as beautiful as a soul mates poem to his love of forty years. I can't are anything wrong. With that and it was done so well in form and punctuation. I just think we all can do better and don't want to give a six when I ill want to say wow to one you write again sone day. I think a couple I'd your rhymes were a tiny bit forced Ans I think I've never done a six sine a

reply by J.R.Brown on 29-Mar-2013

I don't want to point out any correction on something as beautiful as a soul mates poem to his love of forty years. I can't are anything wrong. With that and it was done so well in form and punctuation. I just think we all can do better and don't want to give a six when I ill want to say wow to one you write again sone day. I think a couple I'd your rhymes were a tiny bit forced Ans I think I've never done a six sin

Comment from jppoet

Exceptional

This is not only poeticc art, straight from tge eart, but one of dazzling pyrotechnical power. I first gave it 5 stars but my own review changed my mind, so 6 it is and I will have to look at more of your poems. Congratulations!.
Please take a peek at a peccadillo I recently penned. It will bring you a good smile on this Good Friday. Promise:
It's "TALE OF A SKUNK THAT DID NOT STINK".
john

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

Thank you John. I believe I already review it. Who can forget that humorous work of yours.

Comment from Jaq Cee

Exceptional

I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Who would be able to resist the thrill of a date like that? I like the style and flow of your words. Well worth a six. :) Jaq x

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

Thank you Jaq Cee. I am humbled by your words and rating. Have a wonderful Easter weekend!

Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This is absolutely great: the photo and the poem. Your poem sounds so good, has an excellent structure. Most nice that it holds some personal history of your marriage.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

Thank you robin's. Your comment has me smiling.

reply by robina1978 on 29-Mar-2013

welcome, Ine

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

Going out
On a date
Was a fate
To relate
Not a doubt
It's about
Feeling great
Sing and shout ....

I love the way you formed this poem and the story you tell within your well chosen lines. I truly enjoyed your love story! It sounds SO exciting. I could use a date like that but will live vicariously through you. haha...

Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013

Thanks VisionaryPoet. Join the journey anytime! ;-)

Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

A delightful story. A bit of a tease, and a bit of daring. I liked the tumble-down way the poem reads. You are right - it is like a waterfall.
So sad to hear that Old Smoke Falls were blown up. One can't save fools from themselves, it seems.
A really fun poem, m'dear.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013

Thank you so much Just2Write, dang lawsuits spoil everything. Glad you enjoyed the pem.

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

You did a very good job with this one. Your syllable count is right on key. The story is well told and it makes sense. The rhyming is good, the photo is good, this piece is good. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013

Thanks Righteous. I appreciate the comments.

Comment from Graceland42

Excellent

This is a sweet and amusing poem. Fun to read, and I could just feel what it was like going over that waterfall. lol! I like how you crafted it to look like a waterfall, too, and I enjoyed your notes. Always great to hear love stories with happy endings!

Warm regards,
Grace :-)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you Graceland. I am so glad you found and liked my poem.

Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno

Excellent

Now this is a format that I have not seen before and upon reading the style you have your own waterworks splashing down the page! Love the rolling and quick tempo of this inventive verse and if you recite the words they truly cascade out of your mouth with saliva flowing!!! Lovely to know that such things come true and I am glad you are still together and close! For me the only inconsistent bit that wasn't needed was the closing four lines, nothing wrong with them but for me the poem finished with they flow :) Keep on doing what you do best ... creating a waterfall of pen ink!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank Anenian, for such wonderful encouragement.

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good poem and she still married you must be love lol very funny though must remember that very nice picture thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013

Thank you dmt.