A Gnome's New Home
I should have been smarter!46 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
This is a cute fantasy that is
Very imaginative and fun with
A touch of humor to add to the
enjoyment.
Strong rhyme and meter and a
Well chosen picture.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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This is a cute fantasy that is
Very imaginative and fun with
A touch of humor to add to the
enjoyment.
Strong rhyme and meter and a
Well chosen picture.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Glad you enjoyed the poem and picture. Thanks for a wonderful review.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The message is clear and to the point. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony is where it needs to be. My attention is captured from the photo and held by the words. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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The message is clear and to the point. The rhyming is good. This piece flows well as the harmony is where it needs to be. My attention is captured from the photo and held by the words. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from JM daSilva
Nice poem warning people of the dangers gnomes bring.
Just one editing suggestion.
"I'm very sorry, Sir," I said (titles with names, Sir John, should be capitalized, without names, they should not, "Sorry, sir."
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Nice poem warning people of the dangers gnomes bring.
Just one editing suggestion.
"I'm very sorry, Sir," I said (titles with names, Sir John, should be capitalized, without names, they should not, "Sorry, sir."
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Oops, I should know better than that! Thanks for giving it a six anyway. I'm surprised at the number of people who think this has a moral or a warning. Perhaps one snuck in there somehow. I was just having fun with it. Thanks again for all the lovely stars.
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Welcome. It was very nice.
Comment from Gideon300
LOL! And I can probably say this about a few people... Never, ever take 'em home. Most delightful and enjoyable poem, with a life lesson thrown in.
Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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LOL! And I can probably say this about a few people... Never, ever take 'em home. Most delightful and enjoyable poem, with a life lesson thrown in.
Very nicely done.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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This one wasn't intended to have a moral, but I guess it kind of does. There are a few people I wouldn't want to take home. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from oNray
This is a fun, well written story in a poem. This poem on the light side was a fun read and was so very well presented. Thank you for a fun read
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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This is a fun, well written story in a poem. This poem on the light side was a fun read and was so very well presented. Thank you for a fun read
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Taffspride
There is nothing in this charming poem that needs to be changed.
It is a story in rhyme, and best of all it has a moral. It it fun to read, and moves along well.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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There is nothing in this charming poem that needs to be changed.
It is a story in rhyme, and best of all it has a moral. It it fun to read, and moves along well.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Story poems are a bit of a challenge, but they're fun. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a very entertaining poem Filled with imagery. Reads smooth and has great rhyme. The picture is a very good choice as well. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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This is a very entertaining poem Filled with imagery. Reads smooth and has great rhyme. The picture is a very good choice as well. Good luck in the contest. Nancy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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I'm glad you liked my fun little poem. Thanks for the kind words and the good wishes for the contest.
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
This is a creative fun story/poem Cindy! Brought many images to mind. Strong aabb rhyming and the flow was good.
It held my interest from start to finish!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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This is a creative fun story/poem Cindy! Brought many images to mind. Strong aabb rhyming and the flow was good.
It held my interest from start to finish!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. I trust you won't be taking gnomes home any time soon. lol Thanks for the great review.
Comment from ravenblack
just set the little bugger up as a spokesgnome for Travelocity. good light-hearted story. the moral? it doesn't always pay to be a good Samaritan.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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just set the little bugger up as a spokesgnome for Travelocity. good light-hearted story. the moral? it doesn't always pay to be a good Samaritan.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Think they'd come and get him? lol Glad you liked my poem. Thanks for the great review.
Comment from Rmocruz
You have effectively shared a story in a poem.
This is a well crafted entertaining tale.
Very appropriate to read to a child.
The lead character is this story poem,
I would rather refer to as an imp,
only because I don't want to gnome.
I enjoyed this verse.
Rich.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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You have effectively shared a story in a poem.
This is a well crafted entertaining tale.
Very appropriate to read to a child.
The lead character is this story poem,
I would rather refer to as an imp,
only because I don't want to gnome.
I enjoyed this verse.
Rich.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2013
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Glad you enjoyed it. I used gnome because it was easier to rhyme than imp or leprechaun. Thanks for the great review.
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I believe you didn't get my joke!
Gnome in place of know 'em.
You are very welcome!
Rich.
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I got know 'em. I thought you still wanted me to turn him into an imp. Guess I didn't get enough sleep and I'm a little thick today.
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I could use some sleep myself.
Thanks for the reply.
