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Comment from Johnny-artist
Treischel +your amazing~ love for newborn is noted and filed... great poem with a wonderful picture. All the best for more of your creative approaches to share of yourself~looking forward... honest and sure.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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Treischel +your amazing~ love for newborn is noted and filed... great poem with a wonderful picture. All the best for more of your creative approaches to share of yourself~looking forward... honest and sure.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2013
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Thank you Uncle John. Good to hear from you. Saw you used one of my photographs for one of your poems. Haven't reviewed it yet, but will soon. I'm writing right now. Thanks for the good wishes.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Enjoying your ride as Grampa. Such precious bundles that manage to grow up very fast. Big brother looks happy
We are certainly enjoying your verses about the new addition. Robin:)
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Enjoying your ride as Grampa. Such precious bundles that manage to grow up very fast. Big brother looks happy
We are certainly enjoying your verses about the new addition. Robin:)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2013
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Thank you Robin. Baby and mommy are home now. My gosh, that's grandchild 18 I think. Let's see:
Tom Jr. - 7
Scott - 2
Jodette - 3
Sean - 3
Aisha - 3
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What lovely names, Treischell. And what a lovely family you have. Our Grandchildren are so precious, they are a joy to be around. Another lovely poem for your granddaughter's collection. :) xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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What lovely names, Treischell. And what a lovely family you have. Our Grandchildren are so precious, they are a joy to be around. Another lovely poem for your granddaughter's collection. :) xsx Sandra
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Thank you Sandra. They really are.
Comment from RodG
Your refrain says it all! As a grandfather, I can easily relate to everything you say in this poem. You have an easy way of talking to your reader. Your sixth stanza is my favorite. The only image that does not work for me is when you compare the baby to a "fluff of cotton" in stanza 7. I think you were hampered by your rhyme pattern.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Your refrain says it all! As a grandfather, I can easily relate to everything you say in this poem. You have an easy way of talking to your reader. Your sixth stanza is my favorite. The only image that does not work for me is when you compare the baby to a "fluff of cotton" in stanza 7. I think you were hampered by your rhyme pattern.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Thank you Rod. You are right.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Congurlations Treischel
Sounds like you are a proud Grand father.
I liked how your
thoughts of a child being born,
and this part of your poem realy stiried my past reflections of birthing a child-
Anything more precious than a baby?
The love from two produces cherished child,
That grows from passions purpose reconciled.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Congurlations Treischel
Sounds like you are a proud Grand father.
I liked how your
thoughts of a child being born,
and this part of your poem realy stiried my past reflections of birthing a child-
Anything more precious than a baby?
The love from two produces cherished child,
That grows from passions purpose reconciled.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2013
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Thanks Gert. Glad you liked it. Yes I am a proud Grandpa.
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Smiles
Gert
