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Comment from patcelaw
She is a beautiful child. Here is a poem I share with grandparents I hope you like it.
Across The Room
When you look across the room,
And see your grand children smile,
Why not stop everything,
Just to play with them a while?
For all too soon the years,
May take them to a distant place,
And many will be the days,
You'll long to see their face.
Don't let those precious years,
Slip by until they're grown,
To take some time to cherish them,
And make your love well known.
For as you strive to love them,
The way God wants you to,
You'll build such precious memories,
That they'll show their love to you.
Patricia Lawrence
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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She is a beautiful child. Here is a poem I share with grandparents I hope you like it.
Across The Room
When you look across the room,
And see your grand children smile,
Why not stop everything,
Just to play with them a while?
For all too soon the years,
May take them to a distant place,
And many will be the days,
You'll long to see their face.
Don't let those precious years,
Slip by until they're grown,
To take some time to cherish them,
And make your love well known.
For as you strive to love them,
The way God wants you to,
You'll build such precious memories,
That they'll show their love to you.
Patricia Lawrence
Comment Written 04-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2015
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I love it. Thank you for sharing and reviewing this poem. Yes she is beautiful, and 2 yrs now. A real handful.
Comment from sunnilicious
Talk about excitement. Well, she is a beautiful little baby. It's good to be proud. Your poem is a lovely way to commemorate her birth. Nice rhymes. Forgive me for running out of 6-stars. Excellent poem.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Talk about excitement. Well, she is a beautiful little baby. It's good to be proud. Your poem is a lovely way to commemorate her birth. Nice rhymes. Forgive me for running out of 6-stars. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Wow! You are so clever. This is really cool. Thank you.
Comment from Folorunsho obalugemo
Yes, first things first. Congrats on the arrival of this cherub into your family in particular and the world at large.
May she be a shining light in this awesomely dark world.
Thanks for the enlightenment on your poem. It really struck a chord. Very well written sans any input from my amateurish pen.
God bless.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Yes, first things first. Congrats on the arrival of this cherub into your family in particular and the world at large.
May she be a shining light in this awesomely dark world.
Thanks for the enlightenment on your poem. It really struck a chord. Very well written sans any input from my amateurish pen.
God bless.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you very much Folorunsho.
Comment from Joannforsberg
Aww, I am getting teary-eyed reading this. My fourth child was my girl. The first three were my sons. Truly I had expected the fourth to be a boy again, completely fine with it, as boys are great. So complete shock when told it was a girl.
Just such a beautiful poem for and about her. You need to find quality paper and a frame and send this to her for the bedroom wall.
How beautiful, JO
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Aww, I am getting teary-eyed reading this. My fourth child was my girl. The first three were my sons. Truly I had expected the fourth to be a boy again, completely fine with it, as boys are great. So complete shock when told it was a girl.
Just such a beautiful poem for and about her. You need to find quality paper and a frame and send this to her for the bedroom wall.
How beautiful, JO
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Oh thank you Jo. Great idea.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Such a beautiful little girl. Your greeting of a lovely poem is an outstanding
girt. Congratulations to you and your entire family. YOur poem is smooth flowing and a job to read. The picture is great. Robin :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Such a beautiful little girl. Your greeting of a lovely poem is an outstanding
girt. Congratulations to you and your entire family. YOur poem is smooth flowing and a job to read. The picture is great. Robin :)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thanks for the wonderful words and all the stars, Robin.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Congratulations, Treischel! What a beautiful little girl. I can see this little one will never need someone to love her to bits, or to twist around her finger! LOL, enjoy her! xsx Sandra
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Congratulations, Treischel! What a beautiful little girl. I can see this little one will never need someone to love her to bits, or to twist around her finger! LOL, enjoy her! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much Sandra. Can't wait to spoil her.
Comment from trimple
A fabulous Pantoum poem and wonderful dedication to your new granddaughter Skylar Brooke. Very unusual name, beautiful.
I realy enjoyed this poem and send from across the drink a toast to you and yours, wishing you all a fabulous journey together.
Kindest regards Trimple:)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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A fabulous Pantoum poem and wonderful dedication to your new granddaughter Skylar Brooke. Very unusual name, beautiful.
I realy enjoyed this poem and send from across the drink a toast to you and yours, wishing you all a fabulous journey together.
Kindest regards Trimple:)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you so much trimple. That is so sweet!
Comment from GWinterwin
Congratulations on your new granddaughter, a grandparents delight. Words flowing well with good rhyme make this a pretty poem to read. Very well written, this welcome message in poem for the new little girl.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Congratulations on your new granddaughter, a grandparents delight. Words flowing well with good rhyme make this a pretty poem to read. Very well written, this welcome message in poem for the new little girl.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2013
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2013
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Thank you very much GWinter.
