Comment from Robin Gilmor

Excellent

Well introduced. The humor and verse is completely well presented. Try Benodrl at night. A really good sleep. Enjoyable verse. than you for sharing
your read. Robin :)

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thanks Robin.

Comment from Johnny-artist

Excellent

Wow! Treischel +way cool~I'm glad to have come across such a casual and humorous read...giving me an idea.

Now~the serious portion of "Last Dose"...getting into an accident...concerns from having good times. How about securing such party interests~calling up an agency...bringing one to the appropriate destination etc.

Thanks Treis for sharing. uncleJohn

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2013

Thanks uncle John. Sounds like I stimulated your Muse.

Comment from mystery poet

Excellent

Gosh did Nemo hit your area last night.
Been seeing some heavy snow falls in
the northeast...Sorry to hear you're
sick...Take the NyQuil and hibernate
your way through the winter snow storms.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013

Thanks mystery. Will do.

reply by mystery poet on 12-Feb-2013

Good!

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is so rotten, when you feel like that and can't sleep it makes you feel worse. Best wrap up really warm if you are going out. You have really captured in words, the feelings we all have when the flu takes a hold. I hope you feel better soon. xsx Sandra

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013

Thank you Sandra. Seems to be moving from my head to my chest today.

Comment from Joannforsberg

Excellent

Life has similar situations for people. Last night my daughter, age 22 took the last dose of NyQuil earlier in day. She so needed some more but too sick to go get it. So sent a sibling for her, yet no one wanted to be the one to go. Hope you feel better today. I so enjoy reading your poetry and look forward to see in your name on my list of poems to review. Jo

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2013

Thank you Jo. It is a small world.

Comment from judelesemann

Excellent

You've done it again you devil, you. I vthis one. Terrible coming off a Nyquil high isn't it!!! Keep on writing these so I can keep on reading 'em. Be blessed, Jude

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thank you Jude.

reply by judelesemann on 11-Feb-2013

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Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

I think everyone can sympathize with you about this... Flu-fevers-cold season can bring some unexpected drama. Sorry to hear about sniffles. Feel better.

Good poem.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thank you sunnilicious.

Comment from Flamingbush

Excellent

That NyQuil sounds addictive; nice rollicking beat to this poem. That "Dang!" is like a spoke in a wheel. Round and round it goes, back to that last dose of NyQuil. Sounds like you need a nice fire in your house, with plenty of tea to keep you warm.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Sounds wonderful. Thanks Flamingbush.

reply by Flamingbush on 11-Feb-2013

You're welcome. Have a great evening.

Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart

Excellent

I hope you are feeling better today. I'm new on this site and 86 years old to boot. I hope to do this right. I'm not a poet but I know what I like and I like this. God loves you and I do too.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thank you so much Evelyn. Welcome to the site. Your doing just fine. Hope you like it here.

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

Dang ... you did good if you slept through a 16 hour snowstorm guy!!! LOL I guess Nyquil is the way to go eh? Hehe a perfect answer to the perfect storm.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2013

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2013

Thanks, groan.

reply by Gungalo on 11-Feb-2013

LOL.