Little Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "ROOST"Small and Specialty Poems
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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. Creative undertaking with black-suited birds kind of like they are a mafia waiting for the next kill. They do indeed make a lot of noise. Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Hello. Creative undertaking with black-suited birds kind of like they are a mafia waiting for the next kill. They do indeed make a lot of noise. Good luck in the contest. Cheers.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2013
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Thank you Benjamin.
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture I love the poem. I learned something. A group of crows is called a murder. It fits. You would like to murder them when they get together. The noise drives me mad sometimes. Great work.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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I love the picture I love the poem. I learned something. A group of crows is called a murder. It fits. You would like to murder them when they get together. The noise drives me mad sometimes. Great work.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thanks elliejean. I k ow what you mean. Hope you voted.
Comment from Brumar97
Loved the images of crows... it really needed no explanation. Shape of printed poem was nice. Only snag I could see was in the second line of first triplet... it broke the flow.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Loved the images of crows... it really needed no explanation. Shape of printed poem was nice. Only snag I could see was in the second line of first triplet... it broke the flow.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you Brumar.
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keep up the good work:)
Comment from Neelam Sangwai
A nice one.! Meets the challenge. I also would like to excrement with this form..
A group of crows is called a Murder?
without this clarification I would not be able to understand the theme entirely.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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A nice one.! Meets the challenge. I also would like to excrement with this form..
A group of crows is called a Murder?
without this clarification I would not be able to understand the theme entirely.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you bedlam. Glad I added the note. You can google it to verify.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
A very well done Clarity Pyramid, done with good choices of words to achieve your structure and deliver your story. Good effort that thrills.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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A very well done Clarity Pyramid, done with good choices of words to achieve your structure and deliver your story. Good effort that thrills.
ola thomas
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you Ola.
Comment from Curt Mongold
I like what you did with this clarity poem, incorporating good word use and nice descriptors to tell the tale of the crow. Haven't seen this form in quite awhile, as I have been absent.
Best wishes,
Curt
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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I like what you did with this clarity poem, incorporating good word use and nice descriptors to tell the tale of the crow. Haven't seen this form in quite awhile, as I have been absent.
Best wishes,
Curt
Comment Written 28-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2013
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Thank you Curt for the visit and nice review.
