Getting A-Head
Lengthy Office Hours Secure His Firm Position...30 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Wow! This 5-7-5 is absolute proof that one can be concise and make a powerful point. This is clever, creative, and naughty. Very good
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Wow! This 5-7-5 is absolute proof that one can be concise and make a powerful point. This is clever, creative, and naughty. Very good
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Haha, thanks Janice.
Most appreciate your candid remarks...
Sorry there wasn't more length to the poem but I have a feeling this one stands up all by itself...*smirk*
Cheers P
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YEP! LOL Janice
Comment from Ankh
There is a pub called 'The Rock of Gibraltar' just down the road from me lol. Your way with words really does make me 'stand to attention'.
Seth x
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There is a pub called 'The Rock of Gibraltar' just down the road from me lol. Your way with words really does make me 'stand to attention'.
Seth x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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LOL I seem to recall it was once mentioned in conversation.
The Gibraltar thingy. *smirk*
Glad I can make SOMEONE stand up and be noticed.
(or was that someTHING???)
Haha
You leave me wondering now...thanks for the interest
Cheers P
Comment from Minglement
Hey - you're back! I've been away but am back too and hope to be more active again. I loved this, but I saw all those little blue pills and considered your title and thought - Okay, here she goes again :) Great concept and well executed with a great graphic. Best wishes in the contest! Marcia
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Hey - you're back! I've been away but am back too and hope to be more active again. I loved this, but I saw all those little blue pills and considered your title and thought - Okay, here she goes again :) Great concept and well executed with a great graphic. Best wishes in the contest! Marcia
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Hey Marcia, how are you??? Missed you around here (when I'm here of course! LOL)
Thanks so much for the sixer and absolutely lovely to hear from you. I think the title gave everyone the heads up...hmmm a pun?
HARDly! LOL
Yep, nuthin's changed...my mind is still barely out of the gutter. Posts are very few or none at all, still writing plenty and stashing it but due to family and business commitments I'm time poor at the mo so barely any time here...trying to make a return soon...when my little one starts kindy and my time management skills improve I'll have four mornings a week to kill a few hours in town while I wait for her to finish as its too far to drive home...then the lap top will come in very handy and I hope to find some consistency again.
Hope you had a lovely xmas break etc...take care.
Cheers P
xoxo
Comment from MelissaBickel
LOL now this is a great play on words. enjoyed this senryu and it got a huge laugh out of me. Hope all's well at your end of the world :)... Wonderful senryu
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LOL now this is a great play on words. enjoyed this senryu and it got a huge laugh out of me. Hope all's well at your end of the world :)... Wonderful senryu
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Haha thanks Mel, I appreciate the sixer and wasn't sure if this bordered on a senryu. Not that it matters, I have so darn many of these I could write a book! LOL
Hey I see royalties are filtering in...how VERY cool.
Anyways...thanks for a delightful review.
Have a great day.
Cheers P
xo
Comment from adewpearl
Fantastic illustration and presentation of your poem
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
The play on words with hard and Viagra has me in stitches LOL
a bit risque, my friend, and wonderfully witty :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Fantastic illustration and presentation of your poem
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 form
The play on words with hard and Viagra has me in stitches LOL
a bit risque, my friend, and wonderfully witty :-) Brooke
Comment Written 23-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Thanks so much for dropping by Brooke.
Sorry I couldn't provide a bit more length with the format but hopefully QUALITY equates to QUANTITY.
*snicker* LOL
Risque? Are you kidding? Really?
I have worse stashed...much much worse.
Cheers P
xo
Comment from Curt Mongold
Hmmm....the mind resounds with so many toally terrible puns to use in this review that I find it hard not wag them in front of you. See what I mean? (lol)
I wouldn't know about that stuff, never tried it, haven't had the need, butt then again, you need someone to share it with, use it on, whatever! God, I need to stop!
You're terrible, and I love it!
Good luck!
Curt
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Hmmm....the mind resounds with so many toally terrible puns to use in this review that I find it hard not wag them in front of you. See what I mean? (lol)
I wouldn't know about that stuff, never tried it, haven't had the need, butt then again, you need someone to share it with, use it on, whatever! God, I need to stop!
You're terrible, and I love it!
Good luck!
Curt
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Haha, well you need only wag ONE my friend...but I am having a total laugh with the responses to this.
Glad you don't need the little blue pill, but sorry you don't have any one to share it with.
Hope I'm just dipping a toe in the water, got a feeling I'm at least up to the waist though.
Many thanks for your not so Curt review...LOL, you know what I mean.
Yup, terrible.
Cheers P
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Comment from Jean Lutz
I suspect some of you gentlemen readers are getting resumes ready. Market Researcher wanted. Sure would like to see what they list for Experience. ;-) You've still got it, gal. Best wishes to you with tne entry.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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I suspect some of you gentlemen readers are getting resumes ready. Market Researcher wanted. Sure would like to see what they list for Experience. ;-) You've still got it, gal. Best wishes to you with tne entry.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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LMAO You crack me up woman! LOL
I must admit I've had some interesting reviews.
You've still got it too.
Thanks for your delightfully witty review Jean.
Hope you had a great xmas and new year and good luck with the writing in 2013.
Sorry for lack of presence but lots to do...priorities.
Unfortunately FS is about 10th ranked in my list...LOL
*sighhhhhh*
Cheers P
xo
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Another thought -- wouldn't applicants also need to give references of "satisfied" customrers? Miss you, but understand priorities.
Comment from Warren Rodgers
Holy crap, I haven't seen this kind of humor on FS since closetpoetjester was a regular.... Hey it's YOU! LOLOL Funny funny poem my friend and quite original too! I assume he works part time since if it lasts for more than four hours your instructed to see a nurse.. or was that a doctor? Me thinks a nurse could be more helpful in that situation LOL.
But if he tests every pill, there'd be none left for anyone else! He is apparently sampling a few from each batch and I salute him for his steadfast efforts.
Good luck in the contest!
Happy to award a sixer to you and I hope you are doing well!
All the best! Cheers!
Waaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaaa xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Holy crap, I haven't seen this kind of humor on FS since closetpoetjester was a regular.... Hey it's YOU! LOLOL Funny funny poem my friend and quite original too! I assume he works part time since if it lasts for more than four hours your instructed to see a nurse.. or was that a doctor? Me thinks a nurse could be more helpful in that situation LOL.
But if he tests every pill, there'd be none left for anyone else! He is apparently sampling a few from each batch and I salute him for his steadfast efforts.
Good luck in the contest!
Happy to award a sixer to you and I hope you are doing well!
All the best! Cheers!
Waaaaaazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzaaa xoxo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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LMAO Wazzy babes...how are you?
Thanks for your sixer standing tall.
The nurse would definitely be more helpful me thinks yes.
I am doing well, busy, so I had to erect this quite quickly, but it all came together rapidly.
It's short, but rigid in form I must say...Mmmm.
Naughty CPJ
Loved your review...must head off now though.
Gotta find that nurses uniform...whoops! TMI
Haha
Lubsyababes
CPJXXX
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Hysterically funny and so appropriate to both the contest, my state of mind and your incredible wit.
you've got to do well with this. Imagine, viagara has become a joke, but I dare say, I've never seen it used in poetry and certainly not such a short ditty that caught me off guard and made me laugh out loud.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Hysterically funny and so appropriate to both the contest, my state of mind and your incredible wit.
you've got to do well with this. Imagine, viagara has become a joke, but I dare say, I've never seen it used in poetry and certainly not such a short ditty that caught me off guard and made me laugh out loud.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Haha, thanks so much mate for the sixer and delightful review.
Sorry to catch you off guard but my nifty titles are usually a little hint...I'll give you the HEADS up there. Hmmm a pun? HARDly. That's a FIRM no. God I need a STIFF drink at some LENGTH I think. Just glad the hubby doesn't have this job.
I don't think there would be much writing getting done. LOL
Glad I could give you a chuckle today and thanks again.
Cheers P
xo
Comment from Louise Michelle
Well, look who stopped by to give us some words of wisdom, lol. Ya know, I never thought about the men who probably tried out Viagra before it went on the market. Hm...now that scenario really gets the imagination going. Nope - I refuse to share my naughty thoughts. Hugs, Lou
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Well, look who stopped by to give us some words of wisdom, lol. Ya know, I never thought about the men who probably tried out Viagra before it went on the market. Hm...now that scenario really gets the imagination going. Nope - I refuse to share my naughty thoughts. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 22-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2013
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Haha, hi Lou Lou. Thanks for a beaut review and yep the imagination is in overdrive after yours and other reviews.
Cheers and thanks for sharing in the fun.
C.P.
xo
