The Human Tape Recorder
He's Only Six but He's...43 total reviews
Comment from Indie Skreet
fantastic P and I love the photo - brilliant. where to start eh? the form is great, the rhythm first-class, the content hysterical, you - a star. really enjoyed just in case that wasn't clear lol Hope you are having a Happy Easter Honey, from that cracked-choccy-egg you know xx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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fantastic P and I love the photo - brilliant. where to start eh? the form is great, the rhythm first-class, the content hysterical, you - a star. really enjoyed just in case that wasn't clear lol Hope you are having a Happy Easter Honey, from that cracked-choccy-egg you know xx
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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LOL You nutter!
Thanks Crackers!
Cheers P
xx
PS No its been a shit Easter...but who's counting? LOL
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mm, perhaps he should have got you a battery operated rabbit instead of the chocolate bunny - put that one on next year's easter list as it is sure to help. I am thinking of coming an agony aunt watcha think? An agony and ecstasy aunt lol! Yep, am crackers ok - the choccy egg has finally melted :D luv ya xx
Comment from charlyann
holy crap that's awesome...I couldn't do that in a million years...you brought back a flood of memories from when I raising my own three little human tape recorders...they never shut up...I adored it...and this poem rocks :)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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holy crap that's awesome...I couldn't do that in a million years...you brought back a flood of memories from when I raising my own three little human tape recorders...they never shut up...I adored it...and this poem rocks :)
Comment Written 31-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Hey there, thanks so much. He really is a handy little man at times. Glad I could bring back some pre-recorded memories for you.
Much appreciate the sixer charly - many thanks. Your review rocked me outta sight.
Cheers P
Comment from Jean Lutz
I started smiling as soon as I saw the title because I knew it was about one of two little people. They grow up so fast. He has his momma's looks -- and vocabulary. Speaking of vocabulary, my little dumpling who is not yet four asked me, "Miss Jean, what does dehydrate mean?" The younger one who is "almost two" is now taking soccer lessons and becoming a star. Little does she know a seventy-something little old lady has been teacher her since she learned to walk.;-)
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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I started smiling as soon as I saw the title because I knew it was about one of two little people. They grow up so fast. He has his momma's looks -- and vocabulary. Speaking of vocabulary, my little dumpling who is not yet four asked me, "Miss Jean, what does dehydrate mean?" The younger one who is "almost two" is now taking soccer lessons and becoming a star. Little does she know a seventy-something little old lady has been teacher her since she learned to walk.;-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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LOL Thanks Jean, always great to hear from you.
Thanks for stopping by...
Good luck with the little ones...you sound like you have them right where you want them.
Cheers P
xo
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They have me right where they want me, too. :-)
Comment from Thesis
LOL. Yes, they do repeat things they've heard at the most inopportune times which can create some tense moments.
Children are like sponges. They absorb everything they hear at young ages. It gets a little better as they grow older, but then when you least expect it, they hit you with something you've said for their own benefit.
Gotta love them.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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LOL. Yes, they do repeat things they've heard at the most inopportune times which can create some tense moments.
Children are like sponges. They absorb everything they hear at young ages. It gets a little better as they grow older, but then when you least expect it, they hit you with something you've said for their own benefit.
Gotta love them.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Yep gotta love 'em. Thanks John
Nice to hear from you.
Cheers P
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Comment from Dougspoetry
Once again you amaze me with your skill at composing smooth rhymes and steady meter. No doubt your boy will be privy to these most wonderful gifts. Hope all is well with you! :)
God Bless!
Doug
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Once again you amaze me with your skill at composing smooth rhymes and steady meter. No doubt your boy will be privy to these most wonderful gifts. Hope all is well with you! :)
God Bless!
Doug
Comment Written 26-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2013
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Privvy, shmivvy! You can talk mr Iamb man! LOL
Thanks for the sixer Douglas...much appreciated and yep, I think I passed on the talking genes at least...we'll see how smooth they stay! LOL
Cheer and all is well, just extremely busy...setting up a business website at the mo...time poor.
P
xo
Comment from mojo78
Funny fun to read very visual with great rhythm and good flow. I enjoyed the read and thought the picture went rather well. Well done once again. Hope your enjoying the weekend lv jolene x
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Funny fun to read very visual with great rhythm and good flow. I enjoyed the read and thought the picture went rather well. Well done once again. Hope your enjoying the weekend lv jolene x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Many thanks for the encouraging review.
Much appreciated.
cheers P
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Your welcome have a good sunday x
Comment from Frankeddy
I can imagine the time and effort that you must have put into this one.
Keeping the rhyming and timing right on, nicely done.
Marg and I have been vacationing Horseshoe Valley Resort,Ontario in October
Georgian Manor Resort, Collingwood, Ontario November.Then topped it off by spending New Year's week in Branson Missouri.........Now I must get back to F.S.
for the rest of our Winter.
Another great poem. Keep up the good work. Ed
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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I can imagine the time and effort that you must have put into this one.
Keeping the rhyming and timing right on, nicely done.
Marg and I have been vacationing Horseshoe Valley Resort,Ontario in October
Georgian Manor Resort, Collingwood, Ontario November.Then topped it off by spending New Year's week in Branson Missouri.........Now I must get back to F.S.
for the rest of our Winter.
Another great poem. Keep up the good work. Ed
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Hey Ed, thanks so much for the super review and the big sixer to match. Glad you enjoyed it and nice to hear you are enjoying the vacation bug.
Come back soon won't you?
Cheers and thanks again
P
xo
Comment from Carrie Smith
Yep, those young one are like sponges and repeat sometime repeat what they have recorded at the worst possible times. Great rhyme scheme. The poem just flows along, 'specially when read aloud. xxSusan
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Yep, those young one are like sponges and repeat sometime repeat what they have recorded at the worst possible times. Great rhyme scheme. The poem just flows along, 'specially when read aloud. xxSusan
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Haha, indeed they do sometimes repeat it when you least expec it. Thanks for your review Carrie.
Cheers P
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Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
Wow! No truer words ever spoken. Your human tape recorder!
Fantastic and so spot on. And when they grow up? They still are recording every note and memory.
Just WOW, on this one.
Brava! Brava!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Wow! No truer words ever spoken. Your human tape recorder!
Fantastic and so spot on. And when they grow up? They still are recording every note and memory.
Just WOW, on this one.
Brava! Brava!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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Many thanks for the encouraging review.
Much appreciated.
Cheers P
Comment from Curt Mongold
You spell it out vividly in this wonderful write my friend.
Love the rhymes and the meter is quite smooth to the ear as well when spoken.
I bet it IS quite a gift, and a curse that he has the gift, especially when you say things you don't want repeated!
Lovely poem,
Curt
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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You spell it out vividly in this wonderful write my friend.
Love the rhymes and the meter is quite smooth to the ear as well when spoken.
I bet it IS quite a gift, and a curse that he has the gift, especially when you say things you don't want repeated!
Lovely poem,
Curt
Comment Written 25-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2013
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LOL Thanks for your encouraging review Curt. Yes, he definitely has the gift.
Cheers P
