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Comment from Benjamin Valencia
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Hello. neat poem here. Channeling the inner Santa was a cool concept because I think we're all capable of bringing fourth the Santa out of all of us. I never realized how overcrowded the field of being Santa could be. Good luck and cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 06-Jan-2013
    Thank you Benjamin
Comment from Justin Mawle
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You definitely channeled your inner Santa on this poem and picture. I love the long silver hair ,one length and to the side. I wanted to see the picture with the snarls though.!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
    Thank you Justin. There is a more snarly shot of me as I posed as God in my poem Mind of The Creator.
Comment from rjuselius
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"grew out hair for year
channeled my inner santa
now i've clean cut chin"
but you are so handsome with the beard..
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2013


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2013
    Thank you rebekka . I'm flattered. Did you see my beard a I modeled as God, in Mind of the Creator?