Chester's Christmas
For Chester, every Christmas Eve is the same.2 total reviews
Comment from Nebukadneser
I loved it! I loved I loved it! It's been a long time since I've enjoyed a short story as much as this one. You manage to pull the reader into the story early on in the story and keep him/her there. I loved the rusty gate giving the teenagers such a fright once we learn a ghost opened it.
Well done on a good story in the nether world.
Good work
Nebukadneser
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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I loved it! I loved I loved it! It's been a long time since I've enjoyed a short story as much as this one. You manage to pull the reader into the story early on in the story and keep him/her there. I loved the rusty gate giving the teenagers such a fright once we learn a ghost opened it.
Well done on a good story in the nether world.
Good work
Nebukadneser
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Wow! How do I reply to that! Thank you! Oh, and thank you for the 5 stars! I take it you didn't guess that Chester was the ghost until near the end.
Comment from humpwhistle
Yes, and there is quite a tradition of Christmas stories, too. Do we have Dickens to thank for that, or was he following tradition as well?
I wondered why you didn't give the older officer a name in the beginning.
The story is well put together, and all the pieces fit.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Yes, and there is quite a tradition of Christmas stories, too. Do we have Dickens to thank for that, or was he following tradition as well?
I wondered why you didn't give the older officer a name in the beginning.
The story is well put together, and all the pieces fit.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you for the five stars. Glad you enjoyed the story. And Peace to you Lee. Ghosts or no ghosts, have a great Christmas.
