Little Poems
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Comment from mystery poet
He keeps pointing all humanity in the direction
you write of here, though we grow further than
nearer the zone of safety by treading further
into illusive waters where by our good is drowned
by unknown predictors. I like this new form...
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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He keeps pointing all humanity in the direction
you write of here, though we grow further than
nearer the zone of safety by treading further
into illusive waters where by our good is drowned
by unknown predictors. I like this new form...
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thanks so much for the wonderful review and six stArs
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A pleasure, Poet!!!
Comment from mchapman
I have tried this form of poetry and like it very much. You have seemed to latch on to its format quite well. Your words are emotional and the imagery is evident. Try another this one was excellent. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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I have tried this form of poetry and like it very much. You have seemed to latch on to its format quite well. Your words are emotional and the imagery is evident. Try another this one was excellent. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much.
Comment from L. Sherman
Such a sweet little poem. The message here is very simple and undeniably true. You keep the message clear by keeping everything streamlined and simple. Sometimes less is more, and you demonstrate that well here.
L. Sherman
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Such a sweet little poem. The message here is very simple and undeniably true. You keep the message clear by keeping everything streamlined and simple. Sometimes less is more, and you demonstrate that well here.
L. Sherman
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Gungalo
You did very well with it too, Treischel!! You certainly cannot lose by turning to God. Not a difficult format to handle and boy you catch on fast. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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You did very well with it too, Treischel!! You certainly cannot lose by turning to God. Not a difficult format to handle and boy you catch on fast. Congratulations.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you Gungalo. It is a simple format, I enjoyed trying it.
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You did well.
Comment from Robin Gilmor
Good job. Great message presented in your Tetractys. Your picture shows such strife and the red with yellow print adds to and enforces your message. A very good job all around. Robin Gilmor
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Good job. Great message presented in your Tetractys. Your picture shows such strife and the red with yellow print adds to and enforces your message. A very good job all around. Robin Gilmor
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you Robin, your review is detailed and expertly done.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
When
Life is
Full of Strife
And Nowhere's Safe
Turn to God and Family for Comforting
Good advice always. No surprises here, just wise advice plainly stated. Why is every word capitalized? There is never a justification for that, but I'll give you a five anyway since it's Christmas. :)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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When
Life is
Full of Strife
And Nowhere's Safe
Turn to God and Family for Comforting
Good advice always. No surprises here, just wise advice plainly stated. Why is every word capitalized? There is never a justification for that, but I'll give you a five anyway since it's Christmas. :)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thanks Phylis, your Xmas spirit shines through.
Comment from Folorunsho obalugemo
And there's no gainsaying that life is with troubles and challenges fraught.
This is a very uplifting write, drawing hearts and minds to that truest and most assured source of succour and hope in the life's uncertainties.
What a blessed companion in God man has.
Brilliant piece.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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And there's no gainsaying that life is with troubles and challenges fraught.
This is a very uplifting write, drawing hearts and minds to that truest and most assured source of succour and hope in the life's uncertainties.
What a blessed companion in God man has.
Brilliant piece.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2012
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Thank you so much
