A Little Viking's Tale
A rhyming short story for children122 total reviews
Comment from OLA THOMAS
I like your clear message here, don't give up, don't despair, forge ahead, success is round the corner. Good moral lesson. Thanks for sharing.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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I like your clear message here, don't give up, don't despair, forge ahead, success is round the corner. Good moral lesson. Thanks for sharing.
ola thomas
Comment Written 08-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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Thanks Ola
Comment from visionary1234
LOVE your work, as always, Eric - just did a HUGE review for you and FS decided it was on maintenance or something because suddenly everything got wiped out! I want to see you read this one to kids! :) Sharyn
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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LOVE your work, as always, Eric - just did a HUGE review for you and FS decided it was on maintenance or something because suddenly everything got wiped out! I want to see you read this one to kids! :) Sharyn
Comment Written 08-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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And so would I...It's so funny..me and kids..they all start laughing when I walk in the room without saying anything to them and then when I start, it's out of control. LOL
Thanks Sharyn
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You should film it for us!
Comment from Jina Sarma
good poem to start my day. your topic for the poem is good which made my mood. for poets like you i enjoy my reviewing job. you have told a good story in this poem. you have used appropriate language. you have crafted your words in style.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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good poem to start my day. your topic for the poem is good which made my mood. for poets like you i enjoy my reviewing job. you have told a good story in this poem. you have used appropriate language. you have crafted your words in style.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2012
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Thank you kindly Jina
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, ericdagoose, you did an excellent job wriitng this poetic story about the viking that refused to be stopped by the stop sign. i enjoyed reading it
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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this is very well written, ericdagoose, you did an excellent job wriitng this poetic story about the viking that refused to be stopped by the stop sign. i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Thanks Sweet
Comment from megg_2020
It's been awhile since I've come across one of your pieces on here. Once again, brilliant poem/story/lesson. Oh and Eric the Viking is right, the best things are always free. Blessed Be.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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It's been awhile since I've come across one of your pieces on here. Once again, brilliant poem/story/lesson. Oh and Eric the Viking is right, the best things are always free. Blessed Be.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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I think you have popped me off a few of these 6 stars and your words are greatly appreciated...:]
Comment from EMB
Well, you did a wonderful job telling this story, and I see it appealing to quite a few children. Great narrative. You also did a really good job with the rhyme scheme.
Nicely done. :)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Well, you did a wonderful job telling this story, and I see it appealing to quite a few children. Great narrative. You also did a really good job with the rhyme scheme.
Nicely done. :)
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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It's a great compliment coming from you
Comment from McMurry903
Eric,
This is a great story with a wonderful message that you so cleverly told. You kept great form throughout using quatrains. Very well written, I enjoyed your poem very much! Your friend, Brian
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Eric,
This is a great story with a wonderful message that you so cleverly told. You kept great form throughout using quatrains. Very well written, I enjoyed your poem very much! Your friend, Brian
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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You are a good friend Brian, thanks again
Da Goose
Comment from prayingpoet
Good rhymns, great story line that children and adults alike will enjoy reading and learning valuable lessons from: "Don't let anything get in your way"
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Good rhymns, great story line that children and adults alike will enjoy reading and learning valuable lessons from: "Don't let anything get in your way"
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Thanks Mate
Comment from artemis53
What a great piece, Erica. Excellent form (Surely in stead of 'surly) and great story. I also enjoyed that you tacked a moral onto it.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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What a great piece, Erica. Excellent form (Surely in stead of 'surly) and great story. I also enjoyed that you tacked a moral onto it.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Thanks for the edit
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, this is quite the story poem for children - I love the moral, but I'm not so sure it's the best thing to teach kids to ignore a stop sign. Anyway, the poem itself is a really well-rhymed, fun story.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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Wow, this is quite the story poem for children - I love the moral, but I'm not so sure it's the best thing to teach kids to ignore a stop sign. Anyway, the poem itself is a really well-rhymed, fun story.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2012
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2012
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well if a stop sign starts talking to the kid..yeah they probably should ignore it. Don't you think?..:D
