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A Little Viking's Tale

A rhyming short story for children

122 total reviews 
Comment from Artasylum
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Boy oh boy that was a difficult interaction and I am so happy to see that Eric finally prevailed... I was holding my breath on this was... nicely done... thanks so much. yours, di

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the excellent review
Comment from Giftedone.G.G .
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I enjoyed reading this this is a very creative and inspired peace captivated from the beginning to the end wonderful written beautiful picture thank you again for showing us have a beautiful

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the exceptional review
Comment from Eunice Amero
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THis is a very encouraging poem. You did a great job. There are so many of us ready to quit but thats not the way to go. Your poem is lovely worded so well. Poor Eric. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the exceptional review
reply by Eunice Amero on 18-Oct-2021
    You are more than welcome. Take care
Comment from Poetofheart2013
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Wow what a very cute and clever poem.
It's very creative of you
To write wonderful and
Awesome poem full
Of fun.and adventure!
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the excellent review
reply by Poetofheart2013 on 17-Oct-2021
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a delightful children's story poem with a great message. You should never give up of let obstacles get in your way. I thought it very entertaining, thanks for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for your excellent review
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Ericdagoose,
Nice piece of poetry having impressive phraseology, enchanting flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting a Moral: We should not stop until the mission is accomplished.
The last two stanzas are particularly noteworthy.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for getting into and for the excellent review and feedback
reply by RPSaxena on 20-Oct-2021
    EricDaGoose, Most Welcome!
    With best wishes,
    ~ RP
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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This is a good story. Children should be able to learn an advice i.e. "Don't give up."

When people are given a task to do, don't give up even faced with difficulties. This is like what this story tells you "Don't listen to the stop Sign." but continue until you complete your task.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by Goodadvicechan on 17-Oct-2021
    Halloween is around the corner. please visit my story "The Twin Boys". You will like it.

    Have a wonderful day.
Comment from Rachel L
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Hello Eric,

your poem was pretty neat. I could see children enjoying it very much, you don't really hear about vikings too much anymore I think kids would find that neat

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the exceptional review and kind words
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
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Dear author.




Very good and really cute!!!!!!!!!



Really entertaining!!!! Good job!!!!! May God bless you and your family!!!

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thank you I have no family are you willing to adopt me?
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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Any child would love this story of Eric, the little Viking, and Petey, his parrot. This was a great poem about facing fears, courage, and one friend encouraging another. The imagery was wonderful. Your artwork fantastic.
Enjoyed the 2nd/4th line ending rhymes in each stanza.
My favorite line was: 'Life gave gifts that were seemingly free.' This line would be a great discussion opener between parent and child.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2021
    Thanks for the excellent review
reply by C. Gale Burnett on 18-Oct-2021
    You are so welcome!