Curtain Call
So happy to be stuck on you.82 total reviews
Comment from highlander104
Hi Bob. What a great story. Your vivid descriptions certainly set the mood--and that four seater black couch--mmmhmm. I remember doing a similar scene one Halloween too many years ago.
Really good one.
Jean K.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi Bob. What a great story. Your vivid descriptions certainly set the mood--and that four seater black couch--mmmhmm. I remember doing a similar scene one Halloween too many years ago.
Really good one.
Jean K.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Wow!Jean, I haven't heard from you in years! LOL..I joined in 2004 but remember you from about 2009. Thanks so much for the fine review, the encouragement and the stars. I will be watching for some new stuff from you, too. Bob
Comment from MelissaBickel
I was wondering if it was going to be Maureen at the end lol. I loved the build up and the naughtiness of role playing. The physical side of marriage is important even as we get old, it's the one way we have to truly give of self to one another.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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I was wondering if it was going to be Maureen at the end lol. I loved the build up and the naughtiness of role playing. The physical side of marriage is important even as we get old, it's the one way we have to truly give of self to one another.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Missy. Yes, it had to be Maureen...LOL...What sort of romance story would it be otherwise. But I am glad that you got that engrossed that you didn't see her there until the end. Thanks so much, my friend. Bob
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
What a fun story! I've heard of couples playing these games. It was pretty clear to the reader that she was his wife, given how much they supposedly loved one another. No way he'd cheat. :)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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What a fun story! I've heard of couples playing these games. It was pretty clear to the reader that she was his wife, given how much they supposedly loved one another. No way he'd cheat. :)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much, Phyllis. I appreciate your time and your thoughtful words. Bob
Comment from donaldww
This story had a double twist. I thought Arnie was out at a fortune teller but it turned out to be his wife. Or did I get that wrong? Did she have a second job as a fortune teller in addition to her Olive Garden waitressing?
Fun read!
Cheers,
DW
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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This story had a double twist. I thought Arnie was out at a fortune teller but it turned out to be his wife. Or did I get that wrong? Did she have a second job as a fortune teller in addition to her Olive Garden waitressing?
Fun read!
Cheers,
DW
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Don. No....It was all role-playing. The wife had everything set up ahead of time and he knew it ws her of course. Thanks so much for your time and review, Don. Bob
Comment from AprilShower
Hi, Mastery.
It looks a little like you were getting an little excited when you typed the part below. LOL.
her skirt to her feel her panties (her skirt to feel her panties)
You had us all thinking he was having an affair there for a moment. This story is funny story, Bob. I liked the part about his taking the rug off his head.
I must say this chapter is very descriptive.
April
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Mastery.
It looks a little like you were getting an little excited when you typed the part below. LOL.
her skirt to her feel her panties (her skirt to feel her panties)
You had us all thinking he was having an affair there for a moment. This story is funny story, Bob. I liked the part about his taking the rug off his head.
I must say this chapter is very descriptive.
April
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Ooooops. Thanks so much for catching that for me, April. And thanks for your kind review. Glad you liked it. Bob
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Bob,
This is a steamy story and one I enjoyed reading. Just before I got to the end I figured out it was Maureen Arnie was making love to. What a great way to end this story. This is typical of married people trying to find the time to be alone...been there, did that! Well done and good luck in the contest. By the way congrats in your recent win....M
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi Bob,
This is a steamy story and one I enjoyed reading. Just before I got to the end I figured out it was Maureen Arnie was making love to. What a great way to end this story. This is typical of married people trying to find the time to be alone...been there, did that! Well done and good luck in the contest. By the way congrats in your recent win....M
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Chey! I'm glad you found it "steamy". I hoped it would come across that way. Thanks so much for the six stars, too, my friend. Thank you for all you do in support of my writing. X0 Bob
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You are soooo welcome...chey
Comment from RaymondJohn
Sorta like firemen on call. Tragi-comic write that ended on a cute note. The medium knew her stuff, apparently. It's been a while since I've read you. As always, I can count on you to come up with something good. Ra;y.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Sorta like firemen on call. Tragi-comic write that ended on a cute note. The medium knew her stuff, apparently. It's been a while since I've read you. As always, I can count on you to come up with something good. Ra;y.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Raymond. It's been over two years since I wrote anything other than book chapters. LOL. Thanks so much for your time and review, my friend. BTW...What Do you think of that new TV show called "Elementary?" Bob
Comment from Realist101
Hi Bob! You saved this from being purple prose to romance with the really great ending. This could have been several different categories. Horror, had she turned into an incubus! Lol! Or a vampire, which I don't enjoy. And you're right. The fires will dim. Nice work. Susan
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi Bob! You saved this from being purple prose to romance with the really great ending. This could have been several different categories. Horror, had she turned into an incubus! Lol! Or a vampire, which I don't enjoy. And you're right. The fires will dim. Nice work. Susan
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi, Suze. Thanks for taking the time to read and review this one. I appreciate it very much. Haven't heard from you in so long. Bob
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Bob now aren't you the sly one
You had me going until the end. Loved your closure.
Good way to get the romance juice flowing again.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Hi Bob now aren't you the sly one
You had me going until the end. Loved your closure.
Good way to get the romance juice flowing again.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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(Pardon the pun....right...romance Juice flowing.....LOL..Thanks So very much, my dear friend. I appreciate your time and the lovely six stars. Bob
Comment from Shirley B
Dear Bob, We must think alike. I had a feeling early on he was meeting his wife. LOL You used great imagery here. I loved your choice of phrases also, 'pregnant pause.' Now we know what you and your wife do! LOL Thanks for the great write, Shirley
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Dear Bob, We must think alike. I had a feeling early on he was meeting his wife. LOL You used great imagery here. I loved your choice of phrases also, 'pregnant pause.' Now we know what you and your wife do! LOL Thanks for the great write, Shirley
Comment Written 14-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2012
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Thanks so much, Shirley. LOL...No, we haven't played these roles syet....LOL...I am so glad you liked this one, Shirley. I knew people would catch on right away, but that wasn't a concern, really. I figured the story would still hold up...know what I mean? Thanks again and for the six stars, too. X0 Bob
