An English Spring
Some things I like about spring, but not everything4 total reviews
Comment from Purplerose123
Beautiful! What a lovely poem. I look outside and see all you wrote about. I can feel the words, see the colors and feel happy. When winters grip is bogging us down, I will have this poem to remind me there are warmer times ahead. I'm going to try to save this for future reading. This has to be on of my favorites so far.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
Beautiful! What a lovely poem. I look outside and see all you wrote about. I can feel the words, see the colors and feel happy. When winters grip is bogging us down, I will have this poem to remind me there are warmer times ahead. I'm going to try to save this for future reading. This has to be on of my favorites so far.
Comment Written 29-May-2013
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2013
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You will never know how much I really appreciate this review! The poem has been on the site for a long time but I'm pleased that you have found it.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Well my friend when reading this I was waiting to come to the bit you didn't like about spring I read through the beautiful images and then reached time for your tax return lol well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
Well my friend when reading this I was waiting to come to the bit you didn't like about spring I read through the beautiful images and then reached time for your tax return lol well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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Thanks for the review Jill, glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Craigitar
I like this! Flows nicely with rich imagery, good rhythm and rhyme. You set the stage with all the expected images of Spring only to spring the unexpected--a little wit about tax returns. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
I like this! Flows nicely with rich imagery, good rhythm and rhyme. You set the stage with all the expected images of Spring only to spring the unexpected--a little wit about tax returns. Well done.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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Many thanks. Glad you enjoyed the poem, not the tax returns!
Comment from terry drake
Oh it has been said that nothing is certain except death and taxes. But, putting that aside your poem had a marvelous cadence and your rhyme scheme was well chosen.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
Oh it has been said that nothing is certain except death and taxes. But, putting that aside your poem had a marvelous cadence and your rhyme scheme was well chosen.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2012
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2012
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Thank you for the review. Pleased that you enjoyed the poem... Though you probably didn't enjoy the tax returns!