starry seven seas
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Comment from beekae11
Beautiful . To infuse light and life into the sea as they look up the sky. Very nicely written too. Though I read this in broad day light I can still feel the dark ocean lit up by starry light.
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Beautiful . To infuse light and life into the sea as they look up the sky. Very nicely written too. Though I read this in broad day light I can still feel the dark ocean lit up by starry light.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
Comment from OLA THOMAS
Very well calculated syllables, very thoughtful use of right words,and well conscise use of elements of nature - skies, seas and lights. Good for a 5-7-5 contest. Good luck for your entry.
ola thomas
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Very well calculated syllables, very thoughtful use of right words,and well conscise use of elements of nature - skies, seas and lights. Good for a 5-7-5 contest. Good luck for your entry.
ola thomas
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
Comment from mystery poet
You have made the reader stop, look up
and think. What is the point here.
Obvious! The same bright white stars
shine above all seven seas, thus:
'Bright alike white lights'
Gee I hope I'm right!!!
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You have made the reader stop, look up
and think. What is the point here.
Obvious! The same bright white stars
shine above all seven seas, thus:
'Bright alike white lights'
Gee I hope I'm right!!!
Comment Written 25-Jun-2012
