Return to Nature's gift.
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Comment from Chrisann
This is absolutely lovely, I love how you are consistent with your subject matter all the way through. I find myself not reading all the way through a lot of work, because I get lost in what they are trying to convey. Actually as I was listening, I wondered if you somehow watched me when I enjoy the outdoors. But of course that is impossible as I live in Alaska, while you are in Australia, hehehe. Anyway, your work is very calming and life giving, keep up the wonder work. :)
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This is absolutely lovely, I love how you are consistent with your subject matter all the way through. I find myself not reading all the way through a lot of work, because I get lost in what they are trying to convey. Actually as I was listening, I wondered if you somehow watched me when I enjoy the outdoors. But of course that is impossible as I live in Alaska, while you are in Australia, hehehe. Anyway, your work is very calming and life giving, keep up the wonder work. :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2013
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Alex
This is a very beautiful poem with a good feel through the verses. Well done my friend,I enjoyed the audio as well. Have a superb weekend
Bear
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Hey there Alex
This is a very beautiful poem with a good feel through the verses. Well done my friend,I enjoyed the audio as well. Have a superb weekend
Bear
Comment Written 19-May-2012
Comment from Sarah Rudolph
This is a beautiful poem! I really like just enjoying nature alot, and I really like when you read the poem, then you can just sit back and enjoy.
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This is a beautiful poem! I really like just enjoying nature alot, and I really like when you read the poem, then you can just sit back and enjoy.
Comment Written 17-May-2012
Comment from Imsharrison
Another of your beautiful poems Alex.
It is very easy to read. It takes you along for the ride. I always think that the most important part of any poem is the first few verses. If you cannot capture the feel in the first verses then usually it fails.
I love to hear you reading the poem also. I don't know if anyone has ever said this, but I find your soft Scottish accent really adds a soothing element. Perhaps I am being biased being a Galloway lass myself. I like the verse below. This verse sums up the journey you take us on so well.
I slowly rise from this magic place,
time now to retreat back to the human race.
Oh I wish that I could remain,
and be part of Nature's loved domain.
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Another of your beautiful poems Alex.
It is very easy to read. It takes you along for the ride. I always think that the most important part of any poem is the first few verses. If you cannot capture the feel in the first verses then usually it fails.
I love to hear you reading the poem also. I don't know if anyone has ever said this, but I find your soft Scottish accent really adds a soothing element. Perhaps I am being biased being a Galloway lass myself. I like the verse below. This verse sums up the journey you take us on so well.
I slowly rise from this magic place,
time now to retreat back to the human race.
Oh I wish that I could remain,
and be part of Nature's loved domain.
Comment Written 17-May-2012
Comment from InterestingRon
Hi Auld Yin
A really beautiful poem of a fascinating nature walk.
But you wrote this in English! I guess it saved having to have all those author's notes?
A wonderful presentation.
Ron
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Hi Auld Yin
A really beautiful poem of a fascinating nature walk.
But you wrote this in English! I guess it saved having to have all those author's notes?
A wonderful presentation.
Ron
Comment Written 17-May-2012
Comment from robina1978
A long one for you, but beautiful. All double rhyming quatrains with a good flow. Mostly about nature and so grand it makes you want to cry.
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A long one for you, but beautiful. All double rhyming quatrains with a good flow. Mostly about nature and so grand it makes you want to cry.
Comment Written 17-May-2012
Comment from jaeladarling
I love this beautiful poem you've woven. I could picture myself in such a place, and I felt the decrescendo of having to leave. Another lovely piece from one of my favorite poets. Thanks for sharing.
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I love this beautiful poem you've woven. I could picture myself in such a place, and I felt the decrescendo of having to leave. Another lovely piece from one of my favorite poets. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from ennahanid
What a beautiful write this is. Such a calming write that put a smile of contentment on my face this afternoon. Thank you so much for this gentle, non-negative write, how I do love them that way...Dinah
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What a beautiful write this is. Such a calming write that put a smile of contentment on my face this afternoon. Thank you so much for this gentle, non-negative write, how I do love them that way...Dinah
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Still beautiful to read as ever, my friend. I enjoyed it again. So nice to see you here once more.
Hope you are well. Lovely poem so full of vivid imagery and emotion...takes one away to those quiet times of simple beauty and love.
Thanks for sharing.
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Very beautifully penned in words, heart and soul.
I enjoyed reading this very much. I have my own moments when I gaze out at the wonder around us in nature.
Excellent my friend, lovely rich imagery, wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
My favouite:
"I feel the centuries of past gone souls,
I let my mind relax to play the role.
Long gone life's of ancient times,
my rested mind now acts and mimes." // Loved this stanza Alex, beautiful....
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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Still beautiful to read as ever, my friend. I enjoyed it again. So nice to see you here once more.
Hope you are well. Lovely poem so full of vivid imagery and emotion...takes one away to those quiet times of simple beauty and love.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Very beautifully penned in words, heart and soul.
I enjoyed reading this very much. I have my own moments when I gaze out at the wonder around us in nature.
Excellent my friend, lovely rich imagery, wonderful rhythm and rhyme.
My favouite:
"I feel the centuries of past gone souls,
I let my mind relax to play the role.
Long gone life's of ancient times,
my rested mind now acts and mimes." // Loved this stanza Alex, beautiful....
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 16-May-2012
Comment from TammyGail
Lovely poem alex
i enjoyed the read much
as well as reading along with you
beautiful imagery used as well
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
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Lovely poem alex
i enjoyed the read much
as well as reading along with you
beautiful imagery used as well
thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 16-May-2012
