The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Dark Side of Aerospace Work"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from TammyGail
gmartinez247 I really enjoyed your chapter
it was short so you had my full att throughout
the read. Very interesting reading about your
work environment and wages as well as the people
you worked with..Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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gmartinez247 I really enjoyed your chapter
it was short so you had my full att throughout
the read. Very interesting reading about your
work environment and wages as well as the people
you worked with..Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the positive review
Comment from adewpearl
I had just graduated from High school - high school
$2.50 an hour, but for - add comma
As we got to the end of the interview, - add comma
after looking over my application, this was due - change the comma to a period
I just graduated from High School -high school
the companies insurance policy - company's
I would soon have a child, and she told - add comma
come back after my eighteenth birthday, which - add comma
streets I grew up in, so - add comma
diversity of the employees' race - add apostrophe for plural possessive
his buddies yelled at him, "What's wrong - add the comma and the cap
I asked him, "What's up, Officer - add the comma and the cap
company had it's share - drop the apostrophe
As a matter of fact, - add comma
employees where caught - were
Excellent detail in a fascinating story. Brooke
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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I had just graduated from High school - high school
$2.50 an hour, but for - add comma
As we got to the end of the interview, - add comma
after looking over my application, this was due - change the comma to a period
I just graduated from High School -high school
the companies insurance policy - company's
I would soon have a child, and she told - add comma
come back after my eighteenth birthday, which - add comma
streets I grew up in, so - add comma
diversity of the employees' race - add apostrophe for plural possessive
his buddies yelled at him, "What's wrong - add the comma and the cap
I asked him, "What's up, Officer - add the comma and the cap
company had it's share - drop the apostrophe
As a matter of fact, - add comma
employees where caught - were
Excellent detail in a fascinating story. Brooke
Comment Written 15-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Thank you for the review
