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Comment from THEHISTORYMAKER
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Simple entertaining. Keep up the good work. Especially with the word Dummkopf, meaning calling someone an idiot in a teasing manner. Which originated in Germany. Keep up the good work. Kindest of regards the history maker.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2012


reply by the author on 05-Nov-2012
    Thank you for your kind review. Bill
Comment from tinams
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This is a very funny limerick and you have produced a very worthy entry to the Write A Limerick Competition. I wish you luck :) Tina

 Comment Written 13-May-2012


reply by the author on 13-May-2012
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from ennahanid
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Your Limerick Adolph is fun and the picture you chose goes very well with your words. I wish you luck in the contest
and it was a pleasure to read you today...Dinah

 Comment Written 13-May-2012


reply by the author on 13-May-2012
    Dinah, Thank you for your review which was very kind as seeing that I forgot the word 'was' in the first line (since inserted). Bill
reply by ennahanid on 13-May-2012
    That will teach me to be reading it at 1.30 in the morning then...LOL
Comment from Crackerberries
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Poor old German Adolf he just wanted play golf, thought he'd get to the root and tried to uproot, but just came up with mein kamph.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 13-May-2012
    Yours is better than mine! Thank you for reviewing me.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
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This is a very funny Limerick.
I really enjoy a good Limerick
and wish I could write one.
The rhyme and rhythm of this poem is spot on!
Thanks for the laugh.Honeycomb

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    Thank you for reviewing my limerick.
Comment from gazzagodbod
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lol great little ditty about the war time villain could just see the troups singing this one as they marched home job done great work thanks gazza

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    Thank you for reviewing my limerick.
Comment from Chris Davis
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Clever limerick even despite the odd choice of subject, but hey, it works. The last rhyme is a bit off but I don't know what I would suggest as a change, were I to. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-May-2012


reply by the author on 12-May-2012
    Thank you for reviewing my limerick.
reply by Chris Davis on 12-May-2012
    You're welcome...