Day Closes Up Her Shop
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Comment from NaughtieScribe
This work is charming and sentimental (in a non saccharine way). I found myself smiling half way through the read. Clearly the effects of reading from a talented poet. I found nothing to adjust or correct in the writing. Overall a very nice read.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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This work is charming and sentimental (in a non saccharine way). I found myself smiling half way through the read. Clearly the effects of reading from a talented poet. I found nothing to adjust or correct in the writing. Overall a very nice read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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NaughtieScribe, thank you so very much for your thoughtful response to this poem - glad it caused a smile :-) Brooke
Comment from peggles
Beautiful phrasing as always Brooke
This has nice flow and rhymes to perfection
You are the past master at describing nature
Your fine words are so visual
A very interesting poem
And creative too
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Beautiful phrasing as always Brooke
This has nice flow and rhymes to perfection
You are the past master at describing nature
Your fine words are so visual
A very interesting poem
And creative too
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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peggles, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from donette1914
you wrote such beautiful words with this picture, and you painted a stunning place to be at. very creative when you put, closes up her shop well done
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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you wrote such beautiful words with this picture, and you painted a stunning place to be at. very creative when you put, closes up her shop well done
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Donette, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from leomen
Magnificent poem, beautiful way of singing to the sun, the metaphors speak and clothes lines, creating a poetic image .... excellent ...
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Magnificent poem, beautiful way of singing to the sun, the metaphors speak and clothes lines, creating a poetic image .... excellent ...
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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leomen, thank you so very much for your gracious review and for your generous exceptional rating - I truly appreciate it :-) Brooke
Comment from Winslow
Dear Brooke,
For if the sun was shelved it would be a disaster. In times of old the sun represented God, He who brought life to us here so we could continue.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Dear Brooke,
For if the sun was shelved it would be a disaster. In times of old the sun represented God, He who brought life to us here so we could continue.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Winslow, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from tango494
What an awesome concept to compare day and night to the opening and closing of a shop. I loved it and all its imagery and simplicity. As always you have done an outstanding job!!!!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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What an awesome concept to compare day and night to the opening and closing of a shop. I loved it and all its imagery and simplicity. As always you have done an outstanding job!!!!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Tango, thank you for your most gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from Gideon Roth
Hello Brooke. I loved this. It was another example of a well written poem that makes one feel good when reading it. Have a great day writing...Tim
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hello Brooke. I loved this. It was another example of a well written poem that makes one feel good when reading it. Have a great day writing...Tim
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Tim, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Jami Lynn
I think this poem has great wording, a nice picture and color scheme. I've read through it several times and I'm not sure if I truly understand. I also think it's a poem that you can take it for face value or you can dive deep into a hidden meaning. I like that you have sort of given the readers the freedom to do so, poetry is just as much about how readers read it as how writers write it. I think I am getting caught up in the line "He signs his name in crimson ink" and the word proclamation in the line below it. I feel like those words portray the hidden meaning I was curious about. Especially from reading your more religion based poetry in the past. Great job!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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I think this poem has great wording, a nice picture and color scheme. I've read through it several times and I'm not sure if I truly understand. I also think it's a poem that you can take it for face value or you can dive deep into a hidden meaning. I like that you have sort of given the readers the freedom to do so, poetry is just as much about how readers read it as how writers write it. I think I am getting caught up in the line "He signs his name in crimson ink" and the word proclamation in the line below it. I feel like those words portray the hidden meaning I was curious about. Especially from reading your more religion based poetry in the past. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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JamiLynn, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from bossmyers
Nice piece...love the rhyme and the message. Regardless of what we do , God is still in control. Sometimes we think we are but that is an illusion in itself. We can't keep one single thing from happening. But we can go to God with our pleas and he can decide to answer them, that is what he is so awesome!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Nice piece...love the rhyme and the message. Regardless of what we do , God is still in control. Sometimes we think we are but that is an illusion in itself. We can't keep one single thing from happening. But we can go to God with our pleas and he can decide to answer them, that is what he is so awesome!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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bossmyers, thank you so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Frankeddy
You write so graceful that your poem just draws the reader right into the verse.
I could almost visualize the shelf, where the sun was sitting.
Breath taking sunset picture, we lived on lake Huron and use to watch the sunsets, no two the same.
Very enjoyable. Frankeddy.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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You write so graceful that your poem just draws the reader right into the verse.
I could almost visualize the shelf, where the sun was sitting.
Breath taking sunset picture, we lived on lake Huron and use to watch the sunsets, no two the same.
Very enjoyable. Frankeddy.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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Frankeddy, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
