Day Closes Up Her Shop
quatrains in 8/7/8/7209 total reviews
Comment from rashi kumar
Imagery!!!
He signs his name in crimson ink- wow!
Very beautifully written, presented perfectly and such great phrases, pleasure to read and review.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Imagery!!!
He signs his name in crimson ink- wow!
Very beautifully written, presented perfectly and such great phrases, pleasure to read and review.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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rashi kumar, I truly appreciate your generous exceptional rating and your kind comments - thank you! Brooke :-)
Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--A captivating personification of nature's
inevitableness. I enjoyed the entire read, especial-
ly;
"...Sun cannot be long consigned
to shelves designed for storing."
Also, for me, definitive internal rhymes "consigned/
designed" are noteworthy for "Day Closes Up Her Shop."
The artwork is a personable complement as well. teafor2
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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adewpearl--A captivating personification of nature's
inevitableness. I enjoyed the entire read, especial-
ly;
"...Sun cannot be long consigned
to shelves designed for storing."
Also, for me, definitive internal rhymes "consigned/
designed" are noteworthy for "Day Closes Up Her Shop."
The artwork is a personable complement as well. teafor2
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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teafor2, I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much for your gracious comments and generous exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from HuntersMoon
Another beautiful write incorporating (and personifying LOL) the morning star. It's hard to believe that she'll only be around for another 5 billion years or so.
This was almost haiku-like in that it reveals a side of nature that we often don't consider and enlightens (no pun intended LOL) us to the world around us.
Excellent write, Brooke. A pleasure to read, as always.
Ken
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Another beautiful write incorporating (and personifying LOL) the morning star. It's hard to believe that she'll only be around for another 5 billion years or so.
This was almost haiku-like in that it reveals a side of nature that we often don't consider and enlightens (no pun intended LOL) us to the world around us.
Excellent write, Brooke. A pleasure to read, as always.
Ken
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Thanks so very much, Ken, for your insightful reading of this poem and your gracious comments :-) Brooke
Comment from jadapenn
Glorious artwork. Now think of that sun rising over Kariba. lol. Time we got back into the wilds of Africa. Loved this sunshine poem. It makes me look forward to the morning. Yep, such a bright light won't be stored away on a shelf. Well written. luv jada
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Glorious artwork. Now think of that sun rising over Kariba. lol. Time we got back into the wilds of Africa. Loved this sunshine poem. It makes me look forward to the morning. Yep, such a bright light won't be stored away on a shelf. Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Jada, thank you so very much, my friend :-) I do love your forays into the wilds : -) Brooke
Comment from koolking
I reviewed this a few moments ago but apparently it didn't take so I'm doing it again (I'm new to his site). Anyway, I really enjoyed your poem. It was gentle yet vivid and the rhyming kept it flowing in a nice way.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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I reviewed this a few moments ago but apparently it didn't take so I'm doing it again (I'm new to his site). Anyway, I really enjoyed your poem. It was gentle yet vivid and the rhyming kept it flowing in a nice way.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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koolking, welcome to the site! And thank you for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Allison78
As I read this I picture some of the most beautiful sunsets I've seen. This flows so well and is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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As I read this I picture some of the most beautiful sunsets I've seen. This flows so well and is so beautifully written. I really enjoyed reading it!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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allison, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
He signs his name in crimson ink
until the skies are burning,
a proclamation to us all
his light is soon returning.
Brilliant... a Brooke poem
which not only flows and rhymes
perfectly, but paints a picture
for the reviewers to enjoy...
A real pleasure to open up to, my friend.
Not able to give it a six...
Margaret
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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He signs his name in crimson ink
until the skies are burning,
a proclamation to us all
his light is soon returning.
Brilliant... a Brooke poem
which not only flows and rhymes
perfectly, but paints a picture
for the reviewers to enjoy...
A real pleasure to open up to, my friend.
Not able to give it a six...
Margaret
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Margaret, thank you so very much for your gracious comments and your generous wish for an exceptional rating :-) Brooke
Comment from P1
been a long time brooke
but nothing has changed your
words are still on fire food for
the eyes and the mind. love the
vibrancy of the colour. pleasure
as always to read.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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been a long time brooke
but nothing has changed your
words are still on fire food for
the eyes and the mind. love the
vibrancy of the colour. pleasure
as always to read.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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My goodness, it sure has been a long time! How good to see you :-) Thanks for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from nora arjuna
He signs his name in crimson ink
until the skies are burning,
a proclamation to us all
his light is soon returning.
brooke, i love the middle stanza best, love the part of sun signing his name. interesting way of portraying sunset. and a cute title too. :)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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He signs his name in crimson ink
until the skies are burning,
a proclamation to us all
his light is soon returning.
brooke, i love the middle stanza best, love the part of sun signing his name. interesting way of portraying sunset. and a cute title too. :)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Nora, thanks so very much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is so beautiful, Brooke, the words are so positive, with the light of the sun, such wondrous colors in the picture and such wondrous colors in your words.xsx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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That is so beautiful, Brooke, the words are so positive, with the light of the sun, such wondrous colors in the picture and such wondrous colors in your words.xsx
Comment Written 05-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012
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Sandra, thank you so very much for your wonderfully generous rating and your gracious comments : -) Brooke
