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The Atonement

Because of the Atonement, we have eternal life

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Comment from ennahanid
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Thank you for this very interesting and educational piece of writing. Your faith shines brilliantly here and I am glad that I had the pleasure of reading you this evening.

Thank you...Dinah

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2012


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2012
    Thank you Dinah for this superb review and comments
    Bear
Comment from Permelia
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Loving Jesus is a choice we all must make at some time. After accepting Jesus as my Saviour, it is hard for me to understand how anymore can refuse- but I have known loved ones who have, and I grieve knowing the choice they have taken.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2012
    Thank you my dear. That is the great part of the Savior's plan, we have free agency. I do so appreciate your kind review and comments
Comment from fairy77
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Bear this is excellent the story of Christ.Throughly enjoyable.As Christ made the ultimate sacrifice.You are branching out on being an author.Relish in your success!beth hugs.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 30-Mar-2012
    Thank you Beth for recognizing the importance of this piece
    Bear
Comment from elliejean
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I love the picture. I love the story. I like how you stress personal responsibility. God and Jesus can not do it all for us. He Gives us the chance to earn a place by his side. Great work.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    There now Elliejean is the true answer isn't it. We must do our part because He did His part
    Bear
Comment from RenieReader
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Beautiful rendition of what our Lord and Savior has done for us that we might have the chance to return to our Heavenly Father and Christ in the hereafter. My heart is tender with love because of your words, dear friend, and I thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Renie

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Sweetheart your love of the Gospel and me is wonderful. I am glad we are such good friends and that this message has a place in your heart for the Savior and the Atonement
    Bear
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Very nice Bear Your well writing thought about Christ Atonement, and why we have eternal life

Brought in to my mind this--
Jesus saved us, not through his death, but through his life. He overcame evil and restored a sense of balance in the world, leaving us in freedom to choose good or evil. He taught us how we should live our lives; in fact he showed us how to do it. It is only by so doing that we can be truly happy. When we die, we continue to make these choices, which determines whether we live in heaven loving God and doing his will, or turn away from him to hell. Jesus set the stage so that we are free to choose. We must do our part to choose good, which will draw us closer to the Divine. This is how Jesus saves.

(I found this wonderful quote on the internet)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for sharing that Gert
    Bear
reply by Gert sherwood on 29-Mar-2012
    You are welcome Bear.
    Gert
Comment from writingdream7
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This is really beautiful! I love how you say "He submitted to the Father's will in a supreme expression of love for His Father and for us."
On the "author notes" there is one mistake. You spelled "and" "ans". It is on the last line. Happy Easter! Thank you for writing and sharing!

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the heads up and delightful review and comments and lastly for that elusive 6TH star
    Bear
Comment from Janie King
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Excellently done...sorry I don't have any sixes...there should be no doubt about Christ role and our role towards salvation and eternal life. Great piece. God bless.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks Janie for your grand review and comments
    Bear
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
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A most interesting and informative
spiritual writing, Bear - and so well
presented.

comprehension"so - space before so

Margaret

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thanks for the heads up Margaret. It was good until FS's editor inserted it. Thank you once again for your kind reviews and comments
    Bear
Comment from peggles
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I thought this to be a lovely spiritual poem
Easy on the eye and with soft gentle wording
Your rhyming was perfect
this was a beguiling memorable poem
Which I have enjoyed reading

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2012


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
    Thank you Peggles for your kind reviews and comments
    Bear