Joy
Expelling pain31 total reviews
Comment from strutanich
My two favorites, heroism and giving women. Thats what I took from it, all this poem gave.
The kind of uplifting treatment an emotionally impoverished and sun deprived writer needs
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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My two favorites, heroism and giving women. Thats what I took from it, all this poem gave.
The kind of uplifting treatment an emotionally impoverished and sun deprived writer needs
Comment Written 02-Sep-2016
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2016
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Hi there! Thank you for digging this one out and sending a kind note. I fight depression every day and night and this person used to be a great friend...I sure miss having him in my life. Thanks again.
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Susan
I am never amazed at what another person can do for so many by just being loving and caring. My folks taught me that service to mankind was the greatest gift next to a smile that we can give to others. Here's a huge smile for you and your short story
Bear
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Hello Susan
I am never amazed at what another person can do for so many by just being loving and caring. My folks taught me that service to mankind was the greatest gift next to a smile that we can give to others. Here's a huge smile for you and your short story
Bear
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2012
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Hi Bear! Thank you so much. You are right...but so many of us can barely take care of ourselves, it's next to impossible to be of any good use to others...that's a negative thought...sorry! I agree with your folks. But it's hard. I need a smile! Thank you again! :)) Susan
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Here's a smile just for you
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Thank you Bear! You are a kind and thoughtful person!! :) S.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Susan,
Whoever you are writing about must have helped you beyond measure and I happy about that. Everyone needs a friend like that even if you never meet. I delighted to see a happy poem for your pen. Well done...blessings, chey
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Hi Susan,
Whoever you are writing about must have helped you beyond measure and I happy about that. Everyone needs a friend like that even if you never meet. I delighted to see a happy poem for your pen. Well done...blessings, chey
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
Comment from Judian James
Isn't it wonderful what a few simple words of kindness can do when someone is down. I'm so pleased you're feeling brighter through this friend's open heart! Nicely done Sue
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Isn't it wonderful what a few simple words of kindness can do when someone is down. I'm so pleased you're feeling brighter through this friend's open heart! Nicely done Sue
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
Comment from BethShelby
Hi Susan, It is so good to see you come out with a happy piece. Sometimes your writing makes it sound like you spend a lot of time being down. It isn't necessarily a bad thing for a writer as far as their work goes because any time you can express an emotion strongly enough that the reader can relate you're doing a good job, but it is nice to know you have happy moments.
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Hi Susan, It is so good to see you come out with a happy piece. Sometimes your writing makes it sound like you spend a lot of time being down. It isn't necessarily a bad thing for a writer as far as their work goes because any time you can express an emotion strongly enough that the reader can relate you're doing a good job, but it is nice to know you have happy moments.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
Comment from Skyangel02
It's lovely to hear someone made your day and brought a smile to your face. It's nice to have friends like that.
They are very special.
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It's lovely to hear someone made your day and brought a smile to your face. It's nice to have friends like that.
They are very special.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2012
Comment from pattipac
Beautiful picture segues into your poem on Joy. Not sure if you are speaking of a person or an emotion. Feel it could be a little of both. Especially liked your first line, 'Joy found me today.' It is awe inspiring how the beauty of nature can cause a drastic change in one's emotions. Just as a kind word, or and outstretched hand can pull us from the darkest pit.
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Beautiful picture segues into your poem on Joy. Not sure if you are speaking of a person or an emotion. Feel it could be a little of both. Especially liked your first line, 'Joy found me today.' It is awe inspiring how the beauty of nature can cause a drastic change in one's emotions. Just as a kind word, or and outstretched hand can pull us from the darkest pit.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from Minglement
What a beautiful read and a day brightener for anyone who reads it. I'm so happy to read these words, music to my ears, friend. Life is good. so glad to see you here with this post :) Marcia
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What a beautiful read and a day brightener for anyone who reads it. I'm so happy to read these words, music to my ears, friend. Life is good. so glad to see you here with this post :) Marcia
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
Comment from Anisa-
Awe :)
These are very nice dedication words. I'm sure the person who you've written it for will really be happy. It really is something when you find joy in people and what they do for others.
I think this has a great message in it, and as for the writing, well done.
Thanks for sharing!
Anisa
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Awe :)
These are very nice dedication words. I'm sure the person who you've written it for will really be happy. It really is something when you find joy in people and what they do for others.
I think this has a great message in it, and as for the writing, well done.
Thanks for sharing!
Anisa
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv
Comment from Espresso momma
I have learned as I grow older, my need for many friends is less, but my need for 'a friend' is valuable more than I can say. You describe this in your piece. I liked it. Thanks.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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I have learned as I grow older, my need for many friends is less, but my need for 'a friend' is valuable more than I can say. You describe this in your piece. I liked it. Thanks.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2012
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Hi there! I'm sending heartfelt thank you's via pasting again! SO sorry. I have read these and sure appreciate them. Any suggestions I have written down and will try to take heed! Hugs to you, and happy writing too! :o) Luv
