The Red Swimsuit Story
The most bizarre week of my life.80 total reviews
Comment from elgone
This is quite a story. I enjoyed reading it and got a chuckle or two in the process. I have no idea how I would deal with such a situation but I rather think you look better in your swimsuit than I would, LOL.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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This is quite a story. I enjoyed reading it and got a chuckle or two in the process. I have no idea how I would deal with such a situation but I rather think you look better in your swimsuit than I would, LOL.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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I think the best thing is not to take any of it too seriously! Thank you so much for your great review. Alexis x
Comment from Tammara
What great story, I really enjoyed reading it! You held my interest from the beginning to the end. You look GREAT in the red bathing suit too! Great job! :)
Tammara
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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What great story, I really enjoyed reading it! You held my interest from the beginning to the end. You look GREAT in the red bathing suit too! Great job! :)
Tammara
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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Must admit, it's all been a good laugh at my age! Thank you so much for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from whispersofthesoul
hiya,
i think i also suffer from your condition (I hate shopping, no seriously, I do. I'm one of those people who sees things I can't afford when I find them, or can't find anything I like when I can) and i deeply sympathise with you.
left lots with the imagination you have a very particular writing style that is easy to read and a joy to read.
your story was great and i really enjoyed reading it
well done
you
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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hiya,
i think i also suffer from your condition (I hate shopping, no seriously, I do. I'm one of those people who sees things I can't afford when I find them, or can't find anything I like when I can) and i deeply sympathise with you.
left lots with the imagination you have a very particular writing style that is easy to read and a joy to read.
your story was great and i really enjoyed reading it
well done
you
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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What a lovely review! Yes, you either like shopping, or you don't. Thank goodness for the internet. Alexis x
Comment from Sloegin
WOW! What a nice read. I enjoyed every line of it. You have a wonderful way with words.
Your descriptions made me feel like I was looking at the word pictures you were painting.
I'm looking forward to you new novel.
Best of luck.
Sloegin
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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WOW! What a nice read. I enjoyed every line of it. You have a wonderful way with words.
Your descriptions made me feel like I was looking at the word pictures you were painting.
I'm looking forward to you new novel.
Best of luck.
Sloegin
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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That means more to me than any comments on a dating site! Thank you. Alexis x
Comment from TammyGail
Alexisleech I feel your woe
I despise shopping I never find anything cheap
I have a certain taste and always end up paying for it
Great work on this story loved your picture
You look beautiful
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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Alexisleech I feel your woe
I despise shopping I never find anything cheap
I have a certain taste and always end up paying for it
Great work on this story loved your picture
You look beautiful
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much, Tammy. It's been a fun experience, and certainly one I'll never forget! Alexis x
Comment from FlamingSpade
My friend, you do look amazing in your red swimsuit and you certainly deserve a second swimsuit! Don't give up yet. I loved this. Thank you for sharing and being real! Ginger
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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My friend, you do look amazing in your red swimsuit and you certainly deserve a second swimsuit! Don't give up yet. I loved this. Thank you for sharing and being real! Ginger
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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I might deserve it, but I'm still waiting! Thank you for your lovely review. Alexis x
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very well-written narrative about an amazing event--series of events. I can imagine that you were simultaneously flattered and mortified!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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This is a very well-written narrative about an amazing event--series of events. I can imagine that you were simultaneously flattered and mortified!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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More mortified, than anything! Thank you so much for your fun review. Alexis x
Comment from misscookie
I must say you are a looker and that red brings out you beauitful complextion. I tell this tecgh you got to be carefull I truly enjoy your story very much and there was never a dull moment.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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I must say you are a looker and that red brings out you beauitful complextion. I tell this tecgh you got to be carefull I truly enjoy your story very much and there was never a dull moment.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much miss cookie! I must admit I find the whole thing hilarious at my age! Alexis x
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Comment from Jonesy
There's a certain flair to writing that comes from many things: detail, description, word choice, sentence structure and the use of punctuation. When these are expertly combined together it can make even the most mundane of stories come to life.
I mean, what is this story about, really? A woman buys a new swimsuit, posts it on a dating site and draws the interest of lots of guys. Whoopty-do, right? But it's the presentation! The author lets readers into her life with such vivid detail and skill that we feel we know much about her. An intimacy is created, and when a writer can achieve that they can hook a reader and keep them hooked.
That's what happened with me.
Terrific post.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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There's a certain flair to writing that comes from many things: detail, description, word choice, sentence structure and the use of punctuation. When these are expertly combined together it can make even the most mundane of stories come to life.
I mean, what is this story about, really? A woman buys a new swimsuit, posts it on a dating site and draws the interest of lots of guys. Whoopty-do, right? But it's the presentation! The author lets readers into her life with such vivid detail and skill that we feel we know much about her. An intimacy is created, and when a writer can achieve that they can hook a reader and keep them hooked.
That's what happened with me.
Terrific post.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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I have to say, this one of the nicest, complimentary reviews I've received in a long time. To be told your writing style is all of the wonderful things you've said, has truly made my day. Thank you! Alexis x
Comment from mumsyone
Great story! You have an excellent writing style, and your story is well written and interesting from beginning to end. Great picture, too!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Great story! You have an excellent writing style, and your story is well written and interesting from beginning to end. Great picture, too!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2012
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Thank you! I think there's a lot of people who have had a good laugh over this, including me! Thank you for your lovely review. Alexis x
