As Berries Burst With Juice
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Comment from teafor2
adewpearl--This simple write put me through a range of
emotions: I laughed at this bit;
"...a prime al fresco meal
of nature's fine designing."
this bit made me sad;
"I thank the brook and sun,
I thank the gracious vine..."
(many people/natives in the past worshiped the most obvious elements for their goodfortune); The enjambment made me hap-
py;
"...and then I thank the Lord,
Who made Creation mine."
Scribe's 'Plus Sign' visit directly inspired an uplifting
write of faithfulness. teafor2
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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adewpearl--This simple write put me through a range of
emotions: I laughed at this bit;
"...a prime al fresco meal
of nature's fine designing."
this bit made me sad;
"I thank the brook and sun,
I thank the gracious vine..."
(many people/natives in the past worshiped the most obvious elements for their goodfortune); The enjambment made me hap-
py;
"...and then I thank the Lord,
Who made Creation mine."
Scribe's 'Plus Sign' visit directly inspired an uplifting
write of faithfulness. teafor2
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much for your most thoughtful reading of this poem :-) Brooke
Comment from AlexAX
A great poem and you made me think of when I used to pick berries from the neighbors garden. Your artwork was perfect and they look so real and tasty, such vibrant colors. My craving is not satisfied after reading this, you have made me hungry! lol Alex :)
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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A great poem and you made me think of when I used to pick berries from the neighbors garden. Your artwork was perfect and they look so real and tasty, such vibrant colors. My craving is not satisfied after reading this, you have made me hungry! lol Alex :)
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Alex, thank you so very much for your thoughtful review - I truly appreciate it : -) Brooke
Comment from Anisa-
Sigh ... here we go again with your spring/summer teasers. I want a berry :( However, if I go to the store to get one, I'll end up paying an arm and a leg and they'll be tart! Lol.
Great job with this poem. I felt like I was at the brook, eating the berry. Then I woke up. It's raining outside and no berry in sight.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Sigh ... here we go again with your spring/summer teasers. I want a berry :( However, if I go to the store to get one, I'll end up paying an arm and a leg and they'll be tart! Lol.
Great job with this poem. I felt like I was at the brook, eating the berry. Then I woke up. It's raining outside and no berry in sight.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Yes, berries at the grocery store cost so much you have indigestion just thinking about paying for them. Thanks so much, Anisai :-) Brooke
Comment from babylonia
brooke,
that is a stunning photo. made me smile and then i read the poem. nothing like berries to fill your belly. they can be so wonderful. imagery is excellent. great poem. hope you are doing well.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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brooke,
that is a stunning photo. made me smile and then i read the poem. nothing like berries to fill your belly. they can be so wonderful. imagery is excellent. great poem. hope you are doing well.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Barbara, thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
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brooke,
you are welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
this is simply superb, Brooke...
such joyful verses, which could
be put to music... and the picture
is so right.
Loved this... thank you.
Margaret
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this is simply superb, Brooke...
such joyful verses, which could
be put to music... and the picture
is so right.
Loved this... thank you.
Margaret
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Margaret, thanks so very much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from Honeysuckle1876
Absolutely wonderful. And I can't wait for the berries to start their blooming. I always love to read your work. I loved the iambic meter you chose. Great flow.
Blessings, Angie
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Absolutely wonderful. And I can't wait for the berries to start their blooming. I always love to read your work. I loved the iambic meter you chose. Great flow.
Blessings, Angie
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Thanks so much, Angie, for your encouraging review :-) Brooke
Comment from Kingsland
This was just an excellent written poetic verse. I just loved those last four lines in this poem. You really know how to put together great poetic thought. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of poetic art... John
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This was just an excellent written poetic verse. I just loved those last four lines in this poem. You really know how to put together great poetic thought. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
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John, thanks so much, my friend :-) Brooke
Comment from God's Writer
Very sweet dear Brooke. Such a lovely poem. It kind of sounded like a hymn to berries when I read it. I can understand why now. Beautiful imagery of summer long gone and the future one to arise. Beautiful feelings also supplied. Thank you for this beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Very sweet dear Brooke. Such a lovely poem. It kind of sounded like a hymn to berries when I read it. I can understand why now. Beautiful imagery of summer long gone and the future one to arise. Beautiful feelings also supplied. Thank you for this beautiful poem.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Eric, thank you so much for your gracious response to this poem :-) Brooke
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It was a beautiful poem.
Comment from hellion5
Wonderful work! The site won't let me give you another 6 or I would have. The imagery is excellent, I could almost taste the berries myself.
Great job, as usual--
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Wonderful work! The site won't let me give you another 6 or I would have. The imagery is excellent, I could almost taste the berries myself.
Great job, as usual--
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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hellion, thanks so very much for your generous wish for an exceptional rating - I truly appreciate it :-) Brooke
Comment from Hareem.S
Beautiful indeed. You see beauty and Lord's grace in small things, and beauty indeed lies in the eyes of the beholder. Extremely interesting poem, the reader feels like garbbing the berry in the picture.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Beautiful indeed. You see beauty and Lord's grace in small things, and beauty indeed lies in the eyes of the beholder. Extremely interesting poem, the reader feels like garbbing the berry in the picture.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2012
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Hareem, thanks so much for your thoughtful review :-) Brooke
