Millie and Vicky want to fly.
What is Millie's idea?40 total reviews
Comment from writeapoem
I am amazed your children's poems everyone to deserve to be read in every child's home and school. So educational teaching first homework, then play. Nature and how life awakes every day. All the best and God Bless
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I am amazed your children's poems everyone to deserve to be read in every child's home and school. So educational teaching first homework, then play. Nature and how life awakes every day. All the best and God Bless
Comment Written 09-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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You have just read the Circus Comes to Hedgerow... haven't you, this was where Millie got her idea from, lol. You are very kind in your reviews, and I am absolutely delighted that you have enjoyed reading my Hedgerow poems. I do tend to write more for youngsters. Unfortunately, when I look at the children's sections on the bookshelves, children would probably think my stories too childish with not enough action in them now. I have self-published 11 of these poem-stories in one illustrated book and have loads more Hedgerow poems on here that I haven't done anything with. Unless a big publisher picks you up, you really don't stand a chance out there with the big names. Thank you, again, for your wonderful reviews. :) Sandra x
Comment from resilke
This is very well written. I like the rhyme scheme and it is certainly appealing to children in its easy to read form and rhyming. I found it a tad hard to concentrate reading this as it would take me a few reads to understand what is going on in the story and I think children might lose focus but it is certainly written very well! It is polished and eloquent. I like the characters you've created. And a story about a squirrel is sure to capture attention. Perhaps a bit too wordy but overall it is clever and fun. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This is very well written. I like the rhyme scheme and it is certainly appealing to children in its easy to read form and rhyming. I found it a tad hard to concentrate reading this as it would take me a few reads to understand what is going on in the story and I think children might lose focus but it is certainly written very well! It is polished and eloquent. I like the characters you've created. And a story about a squirrel is sure to capture attention. Perhaps a bit too wordy but overall it is clever and fun. Keep writing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, resilke, for this lovely review. I understand what you are saying, I am trying to get this book together with lots of illustrations, perhaps one every 2 stanzas. I have 10 of them written now, and another 5 started. I am not an illustrator, but am on the lookout for one! Thank you again, for reviewing and reading. xsx
Comment from gazzagodbod
love childrens poetry and this is great colourful and well presented and a wonderful poem filled with happy imagery perfect thanks gazzax
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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love childrens poetry and this is great colourful and well presented and a wonderful poem filled with happy imagery perfect thanks gazzax
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, gazza, that is such a lovely review! I appreciate it so much, thank you. xsx
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, this is such a wonderful story to read and enjoy. The whimsicalness of it is quite enchanting with these three characters. Millie and Vicky wanting to do what miss toad was doing in the circus and Cyril.
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I also need to go back to the beginning to catch up with this book.
Well done my friend,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Sandra, this is such a wonderful story to read and enjoy. The whimsicalness of it is quite enchanting with these three characters. Millie and Vicky wanting to do what miss toad was doing in the circus and Cyril.
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I also need to go back to the beginning to catch up with this book.
Well done my friend,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Jim! Thank you!! I hope you enjoy them as much! Thank you so much! xsx
Comment from jmdg1954
Sandra, what a wonderful poem. I wish I had a six to extend to you, its quite deserving. I have been off FS for about six months and am starting to make my way back. This is one of the reasons I want back in. I now have to go back and read the other chapters to this book. I am going to "tag" you as one of the fans I follow so I can get your posts first hand. Is that alright with you?
Johnny
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Sandra, what a wonderful poem. I wish I had a six to extend to you, its quite deserving. I have been off FS for about six months and am starting to make my way back. This is one of the reasons I want back in. I now have to go back and read the other chapters to this book. I am going to "tag" you as one of the fans I follow so I can get your posts first hand. Is that alright with you?
Johnny
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Is it alright with me! How could I turn down such an honor!! Thank you so much for this really lovely review! I hope you enjoy the others as much. xsx
Comment from Cedar
This was a very enjoyable poem to read. I love your poem with all the different animals and you have written it in perfect rhyme. Great job. Bill
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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This was a very enjoyable poem to read. I love your poem with all the different animals and you have written it in perfect rhyme. Great job. Bill
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Bill! I am so very pleased you liked it! xsx
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your children's poem. It was entertaining and well written and the characters were having so much fun with a little excitement and drama in play. Your artwork choice enhances your poem.
Angel123
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I enjoyed reading your children's poem. It was entertaining and well written and the characters were having so much fun with a little excitement and drama in play. Your artwork choice enhances your poem.
Angel123
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Ange123, That is so nice of you, thank you for this lovely review. xsx
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Again--your narrative poems are wonderful--well-written, fanciful, delightful. I can't imagine any child not loving them--or any adult!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Again--your narrative poems are wonderful--well-written, fanciful, delightful. I can't imagine any child not loving them--or any adult!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your review, I am so pleased you liked it, and thank you for the lovely stars! xsx
Comment from missy98writer
Sandra,
Your story poem is delightfully written and your words paint superb imagery in the readers head. The art work is adorable you used. In your story poem you used excellent personification, great rhyme, great alliteration usage and very good descriptive scheme. I enjoyed your lines: "Cyril the squirrel was such a nice boy And did what they asked, so they could enjoy The sun in their face and the cool of the breeze And the thrill they would feel on their flying trapeze. Then it was finished, they were raring to go, They held on to the rope as it swung to and fro." I immensely enjoyed your well scribed children's poem because I'm a kid at heart. I'd recommend your charming story poem to other readers. Thanks for sharing your poetic jewel. Please have a blessed day.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Sandra,
Your story poem is delightfully written and your words paint superb imagery in the readers head. The art work is adorable you used. In your story poem you used excellent personification, great rhyme, great alliteration usage and very good descriptive scheme. I enjoyed your lines: "Cyril the squirrel was such a nice boy And did what they asked, so they could enjoy The sun in their face and the cool of the breeze And the thrill they would feel on their flying trapeze. Then it was finished, they were raring to go, They held on to the rope as it swung to and fro." I immensely enjoyed your well scribed children's poem because I'm a kid at heart. I'd recommend your charming story poem to other readers. Thanks for sharing your poetic jewel. Please have a blessed day.
Melissa.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Oh, thank you, Melissa! What a wonderful review, I am so pleased you enjoyed my story! Thank you! xsx Sandra.
Comment from SamuelClemens
I'm glad you put this up. It's been awhile since I've read and enjoyed the simplicity of poetry for children. Thank you.
SC.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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I'm glad you put this up. It's been awhile since I've read and enjoyed the simplicity of poetry for children. Thank you.
SC.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Samuel! What a lovely thing to say, I am so very pleased you liked it, thank you. xsx
