Nature
Nature should be our soul!6 total reviews
Comment from Vijay Kumar V
Lovely thought!
Caring about nature-something which no one cares for and i'm glad that you've got to do it.
I know a poet will never stop writing,but
Y don't you start posting again.
Waiting for your next posting!
Have a honey day!:):):)
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Lovely thought!
Caring about nature-something which no one cares for and i'm glad that you've got to do it.
I know a poet will never stop writing,but
Y don't you start posting again.
Waiting for your next posting!
Have a honey day!:):):)
Comment Written 04-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Hi...such a lovely comment that I have read!
Have a sweet day and sorry for replying late; thank you as well. :D
Comment from ernesto escarro
Nature
This is a short poem of course
of a healthy mind caring for
clean society.
I wish to gather bins and bring this message to the world.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Nature
This is a short poem of course
of a healthy mind caring for
clean society.
I wish to gather bins and bring this message to the world.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2013
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Hye,
That sounds good!
(Clapping my hands)
Hehehehe
Comment from hollyinvesuvianite
I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I like the word you chose for garbage. This is absolutely true, and something needs to be done about it! Well stated! Holly
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, and I like the word you chose for garbage. This is absolutely true, and something needs to be done about it! Well stated! Holly
Comment Written 21-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Hye there...thank you very much for your sweet review...:) have a nice day
Comment from adewpearl
rub/bish/are/thrown/ev/ry/where - this is 7 syllables instead of 5
not/in/the/dust/bins - this is 5 instead of 7
the final line is correct in syllable count
Rubbish is a collective noun, so we customarily say rubbish is - we would say wrappers are thrown or cigarette butts are thrown
You make a most thoughtful point about how people are careless about their environment.
I like your use of a question, which forces the reader to really think about the topic as she searches for an answer :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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rub/bish/are/thrown/ev/ry/where - this is 7 syllables instead of 5
not/in/the/dust/bins - this is 5 instead of 7
the final line is correct in syllable count
Rubbish is a collective noun, so we customarily say rubbish is - we would say wrappers are thrown or cigarette butts are thrown
You make a most thoughtful point about how people are careless about their environment.
I like your use of a question, which forces the reader to really think about the topic as she searches for an answer :-) Brooke
Comment Written 28-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2012
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My problem is grammar. I have a lot of points to say and usually my points will be less because of grammar as I did not practise speaking in English when I were small. Im regretting it now.:( Thank you very much for the review.
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I teach a grammar class - you would be surprised how many grammar problems people have even though they've been speaking English all their lives :-)
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My lecturers here always say that we dont practise it since we were young. Even some give up too. I could not imagine that there are still people have problems in grammar. I thought only people in Malaysia would have the problem.
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I think most kids in this country think grammar is boring so they don't pay attention to it in school.
I have grammar students on this site who are 50, 60 years old who have major problems with grammar, either because they didn't pay attention to it back then or they've just forgotten it over the years :-)
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I was shocked! 50/60 years old people are having problems there? Well, here we have three different types of schools-Malay, Chinese, Tamail. And sad to say, almost three quarter of the students do not know how to speak in English. And we are paid by the Government to train us a professional English teacher just for them.
Comment from J. P. Egry
The premise of this 5-7-5 poem is very sound--its message important. But the presentation of the idea is a little choppy. There is incorrect syllabication---the first line should have 5 syllables, the second line should have 7 syllables. The word rubbish is a singular noun and should therefore be followed by "is" instead of "are".
Take another careful look and see if you can do a little reworking before the contest judging.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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The premise of this 5-7-5 poem is very sound--its message important. But the presentation of the idea is a little choppy. There is incorrect syllabication---the first line should have 5 syllables, the second line should have 7 syllables. The word rubbish is a singular noun and should therefore be followed by "is" instead of "are".
Take another careful look and see if you can do a little reworking before the contest judging.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Thank you for correcting me...really appreciate it and will take a carefull look after this...:D
Comment from mumsyone
Rubbish are (is) thrown everywhere, (7 syllables)
Not in the dustbins, (5 syllables)
Nature-Do we care? (5 syllables)
Your poem is a 7-5-5 instead of a 5-7-5. I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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Rubbish are (is) thrown everywhere, (7 syllables)
Not in the dustbins, (5 syllables)
Nature-Do we care? (5 syllables)
Your poem is a 7-5-5 instead of a 5-7-5. I hope you can fix it so that it qualifies for the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2012
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thank you very much...Im indeed careless about it. :D
