Comment from
Gungalo
A really cool children's story and something to laugh about when they are sick. Wonderful rhymes and a beautiful layout. I think it is grand!!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
Thank you Gungalo, for such a lovley review! xsx
reply by Gungalo on 08-Jan-2012
Comment from
Modee
Wow. This was very cool and very well written. Why don't you make this into a children's book. It is so very cool. Enjoyed it thoroughly. :)
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
Thank you again, Modee, you are so kind. xsx
Comment from
peggles
Such a fun read
What a fantastic poem
It was fun
it rhymed and it was beautifully balanced.
easy on the eye and set at a good rhyming pace
It made me smile
well done
Comment Written 08-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2012
Thank you for such a lovely and thoughtful review!