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The Two of Me

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "To live is to sleep"
Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from oNray
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Well written. Your thoughts are clearly given and explained, nice job with that. I feel the DNA you are referring to is built according to opportunity,location, leadership

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    Thank You for the review
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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What the white 'immigrants' as they truly were did to the native Americans and Mexicans is inexcusable. I don't know how to make it right today especially with today's political climate, but something should. If nothing else, equality would be a start. ~Debbie

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2012
    Thank You for the review
Comment from brianiac
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Ok I read the disclaimer but I am not so sure I believe it. If this work is totally ficticous then you should run for politics because this was more believable than the last acceptance speech by the president. Very well written and I am going to do research because it really made me want to know more. Great write either way

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
    Thank you for the review - I did mix in alot of historical facts after researching the subject.
Comment from Gungalo
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Your absolutely right! There is DNA involved in it and we can't do much to stop it. It was interesting to read what the ancients thought.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2012
    Thank you for the review
reply by Gungalo on 01-Jan-2012
    You're welcome.