The Two of Me
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Growing up fast in Pacas"Chochee Medina Life and Times
2 total reviews
Comment from peggles
I find your story well prepared and displayed. Good content and story line
A very realistic story that I thoroughly enjoyed
Characters are believable without any clutter and the scene settings are very realistic So many are forced to join gangs because of circumstances making it impossible to exist without being a member
You captured my interest quickly
The ending was good
showing that all can be reformed if the want is there and continue on to responsible adulthood
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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I find your story well prepared and displayed. Good content and story line
A very realistic story that I thoroughly enjoyed
Characters are believable without any clutter and the scene settings are very realistic So many are forced to join gangs because of circumstances making it impossible to exist without being a member
You captured my interest quickly
The ending was good
showing that all can be reformed if the want is there and continue on to responsible adulthood
Comment Written 17-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you very much for the review
Comment from KinaSalad
Kia ora Gmartinez247, I enjoyed reading your story here, growing up in the hood and the gang life. I'm from New Zealand and life was similar. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Kia ora Gmartinez247, I enjoyed reading your story here, growing up in the hood and the gang life. I'm from New Zealand and life was similar. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 17-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2011
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Thank you very much for the review
