The Two of Me
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3 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
The forth born son (fourth is the number)
Nice, brief introduction to the character in the book. Well written except that one spag. I believe prologues should be short and the story left for the book. You have done that. Good luck with your book!!! DEbbie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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The forth born son (fourth is the number)
Nice, brief introduction to the character in the book. Well written except that one spag. I believe prologues should be short and the story left for the book. You have done that. Good luck with your book!!! DEbbie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the review.
Comment from Apostate
Unless a story is about uptight and maladjusted white people and their struggle to get that stick out of their a*s I just can't get into it.
LMFAO - sorry, but honestly, too much literature is about the above. (My in-laws, all Hispanic, would probably agree with me on that score - LOL.)
I liked this introduction. The subject is interesting to me. And the writing style was calm and adult.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Unless a story is about uptight and maladjusted white people and their struggle to get that stick out of their a*s I just can't get into it.
LMFAO - sorry, but honestly, too much literature is about the above. (My in-laws, all Hispanic, would probably agree with me on that score - LOL.)
I liked this introduction. The subject is interesting to me. And the writing style was calm and adult.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you for the review - the book will be about liviving somewhat of a dual life, the intro will give some background info on the character to better understand him.
Comment from Cindy Warren
It sounds like it's going to be interesting. The 60's and 70's were interesting times. I'll look forward to reading more chapters.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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It sounds like it's going to be interesting. The 60's and 70's were interesting times. I'll look forward to reading more chapters.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2011
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Thank you - I hope you will enjoy reading it.
