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Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "what's there?"keeping hope alive....
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Comment from elliejean
Oh, I believe there will have to be chocolate in heaven.I believe this life is perfecting us for the next . There will be no pain. I like your idea of heaven.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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Oh, I believe there will have to be chocolate in heaven.I believe this life is perfecting us for the next . There will be no pain. I like your idea of heaven.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2011
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thank you ellie :)
Comment from sgalletti
Hey Shel! True to form, chocolate is waiting in Heaven! Fun acrostic and a good entry in this contest, adding to the idea of the sweets in grand style. Sue
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Hey Shel! True to form, chocolate is waiting in Heaven! Fun acrostic and a good entry in this contest, adding to the idea of the sweets in grand style. Sue
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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hehe thank you sue! :)
Comment from Sasha
What a delicious and fun poem. This is a terrific entry for this contest. I love your fun, clever and unique approach. This is wonderfully uplifting. Excellent work and I wish you all the best in the contest too.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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What a delicious and fun poem. This is a terrific entry for this contest. I love your fun, clever and unique approach. This is wonderfully uplifting. Excellent work and I wish you all the best in the contest too.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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hehe thanx smurphette :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Shelley,
What to I think
Good poem for the contest. Like the way you formatted your two stanzas
Good luck
Smiles
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Hi Shelley,
What to I think
Good poem for the contest. Like the way you formatted your two stanzas
Good luck
Smiles
Gert
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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thank you gert :)
Comment from Word Weaver
..with chocolate fountains, lakes, and houses. Isn't that just a PERFECT heaven?? they do say that chocolate flows in the female veins :p
well, dear friend, mission accomplished: now I'm craving chocolate..why did you have to include such a torturing picture?? *siiiiigh*
but I must say, shel, it was really a delightful piece of poetry. loved it, especially the rhyme scheme and the alliteration in the second and fourth lines (sounds in poetry work the best for me since I read poetry out loud :D)
well if they DO offer Chocolate Kitties over there than it is most certainly something worth dying for..
PS. isn't the poem shaped like a shaded lamp? cooool...wanna make one of those too.
PSS. needless to say, I simply HAD to give this a sixer or else I'd be failing chocolate..
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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..with chocolate fountains, lakes, and houses. Isn't that just a PERFECT heaven?? they do say that chocolate flows in the female veins :p
well, dear friend, mission accomplished: now I'm craving chocolate..why did you have to include such a torturing picture?? *siiiiigh*
but I must say, shel, it was really a delightful piece of poetry. loved it, especially the rhyme scheme and the alliteration in the second and fourth lines (sounds in poetry work the best for me since I read poetry out loud :D)
well if they DO offer Chocolate Kitties over there than it is most certainly something worth dying for..
PS. isn't the poem shaped like a shaded lamp? cooool...wanna make one of those too.
PSS. needless to say, I simply HAD to give this a sixer or else I'd be failing chocolate..
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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LOL! thank you word! glad ya liked it! :)
Comment from nomi338
An idea that warms the heart and raises hope to a higher level. Whether true or not it certainly paints a happy picture and give insight into the hopes, dreams and desires of many. Good job.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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An idea that warms the heart and raises hope to a higher level. Whether true or not it certainly paints a happy picture and give insight into the hopes, dreams and desires of many. Good job.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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hehe thank you nomi :)
Comment from Ritsal
Well, you did a great job of answering the question, and I believe your graphic is probably another gift awaiting us. Heaven will be perfect so it must include chocolate, though probably not to excess! Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Rita
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Well, you did a great job of answering the question, and I believe your graphic is probably another gift awaiting us. Heaven will be perfect so it must include chocolate, though probably not to excess! Good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
Rita
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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lol! thanx rita! :)
Comment from Eleanor Buron
Unusual and delightful poem; an acrostic using the heavenly and divine symbol of Chocolate! I enjoyed this poem very much. Clever and gave me a smile.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Unusual and delightful poem; an acrostic using the heavenly and divine symbol of Chocolate! I enjoyed this poem very much. Clever and gave me a smile.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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hehehe thank you eleanor :)
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Wicked, wicked, Hehehe. Hey I may not be able to write well about chocolate, but I sure know how to eat it. Yum, light, dark and whatever. Elly
Comment from vickib
Boy you really changed it up in the dance line Shelley. LOL! Oh man I hope your right that would be so fun. Does it read "late" down the side of the last verse? Because you were eating chocolate that's why. LOL I don't know if you even meant it to spell something. Too cute, okay maybe I won't be so afraid then. XO Vicki
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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Boy you really changed it up in the dance line Shelley. LOL! Oh man I hope your right that would be so fun. Does it read "late" down the side of the last verse? Because you were eating chocolate that's why. LOL I don't know if you even meant it to spell something. Too cute, okay maybe I won't be so afraid then. XO Vicki
Comment Written 16-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2011
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yea the acrostic .... choc o late :-D
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OH GOODGRIEF I see it now. What the heck, am I losing it or what Shelley? LOL OMG HAHA OH MAN SO TRICKY you are for my poor ole eyes to see or I mean brain. XO
