Dog
A dog alone...34 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Being a dog person, I was pulling for the dog-but yes that is how life is. very creative and the picture really creepy. Great one for Halloween!!! Hugs!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Being a dog person, I was pulling for the dog-but yes that is how life is. very creative and the picture really creepy. Great one for Halloween!!! Hugs!!! Debbie
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Hi there! And thank you for this kind review! Please accept my apologies for this late note, and have a great Sunday! hug! Susan
Comment from Bellringer
Susan, Very well written horror flash. There is plenty of action to satisfy any fan of this genre. I learned that no matter how "bad" one thinks they are, there is always someone meaner and badder. I like how you left the mysterious creature to the imagination. Excellent work. Blessings, Hector
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Susan, Very well written horror flash. There is plenty of action to satisfy any fan of this genre. I learned that no matter how "bad" one thinks they are, there is always someone meaner and badder. I like how you left the mysterious creature to the imagination. Excellent work. Blessings, Hector
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Hi Hector! Thank you...your reviews are always so kind, but also detailed which gives me hope and the desire to keep going. I did write a part two in a contest...I felt this thing needed more.? Fun! THanks again my friend...Susan
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My pleasure, Susan. Regards, Hector
Comment from rchitwood
Very creative story though I am sad the dog was killed your story has good imagination and one could almost see the battle from your story.Very well written and I enjoyed reading it.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Very creative story though I am sad the dog was killed your story has good imagination and one could almost see the battle from your story.Very well written and I enjoyed reading it.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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Thank you Rita!! Your time for me is wonderful...hug! Susan
Comment from Gungalo
What demon was this? It sounds very powerful and it made short work of the dog. This is very touching and convincing. You did a wonderful job!!
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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What demon was this? It sounds very powerful and it made short work of the dog. This is very touching and convincing. You did a wonderful job!!
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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:)) I have no idea! I am doing a part two trying to figure it out! How odd, I get these nutty ideas and have to go thru with it. Thank you dear Caterpillar! HUG! Suse
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Oh dear me I'll wait and see!!
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You are so sweet...and I know, beautiful too. S.
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Sigh...
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You already know I am not a fan of horror or science fiction, but I will not give you less stars because of my perference. You did a good job and it is Halloween.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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You already know I am not a fan of horror or science fiction, but I will not give you less stars because of my perference. You did a good job and it is Halloween.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2011
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HI again! So, this is extra special Barbara...what a great reviewer you are. AND brave to read something scary that you don't enjoy...wow!! A special hug to you young lady!! xoxo, susan
Comment from adewpearl
Excellent opening that sets the tone effectively
Great use of high-impact action verbs bring this scene to life: emerge, bunch,flatten, squawked...
Vivid and gruesome descriptive detail - powerful ending. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Excellent opening that sets the tone effectively
Great use of high-impact action verbs bring this scene to life: emerge, bunch,flatten, squawked...
Vivid and gruesome descriptive detail - powerful ending. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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HI Brooke! SO glad you read this...I was going to ask you about a couple of sentences...but I think they are okay. Thank you so much!! Happy Halloween! Susan
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Susan,
You have done a masterful job writing this story. I found myself cheering for dog as grew to hate the demon. This is a creative story, creepy and scary. A perfect Halloween story that you wrote so well. I wish I ad a six for you...blessings, chey
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Hi Susan,
You have done a masterful job writing this story. I found myself cheering for dog as grew to hate the demon. This is a creative story, creepy and scary. A perfect Halloween story that you wrote so well. I wish I ad a six for you...blessings, chey
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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HI Chey! Your thought of a six is good enough! A real honor too! Thank you again...this was such fun...? I know I'm odd...lol! S.
Comment from Carolyn 12
This was scary. Beginning with the picture and then through your story.Poor dog. The unknown beast is always the scariest thing the mind can conjure. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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This was scary. Beginning with the picture and then through your story.Poor dog. The unknown beast is always the scariest thing the mind can conjure. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Hi Carolyn~ Thank you! I know, I used to camp out with our horses, and it's scary, but usually nothing...when you hear a small growl, or rustling in the brush...but!! You never know! I'm glad you liked this~ SO long ago~ Lol~ xoxo, Susan
Comment from robina1978
Wondered why you made this so scary and bloody. But your foot note explained. So well written and with such a scary picture. Glad it is just a story. You gave your main dog character depth. And held my attention all the way.
I for one would be glad if Halloween is past-LOL.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Wondered why you made this so scary and bloody. But your foot note explained. So well written and with such a scary picture. Glad it is just a story. You gave your main dog character depth. And held my attention all the way.
I for one would be glad if Halloween is past-LOL.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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HI Ine! I used to like Halloween, but seems it's a time for people to just show their you know what, it's supposed to be fun...Oh well. Thank you dear Ine! Susan
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This one as well I seem to remember.
Did not remember it was yours, but it just stood out.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, susan, a great job writing this story about the dog who was killed by a vicious thing that lurked in the woods. i enjoyed reading this....great picture
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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this is very well written, susan, a great job writing this story about the dog who was killed by a vicious thing that lurked in the woods. i enjoyed reading this....great picture
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2011
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Hi Pam, ah! I am almost caught up with the great reviews! Thank you very very much for reading this back in October! WOW~ :) Susan
