Comment from robina1978

Excellent

This one is absolutely hilarious: this Dundee lad being able to fart at different notes. Then one day it goes terribly wrong- you know how. So from then on he keeps his music more to himself.
Should teach hubby to do this-LOL. His are not musical at all, believe it or not.
It reads and flows so well. Rhymes without being forced.
A joy to review.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from rashi kumar

Excellent

Another one to make us laugh!!
Funny expressions!
The humor is always there in your poem with this vernacular.
The story is humorous!!
N your sense of humor is NOT cheap AT ALL,
you have an intelligent sense of humor and I love to read your works ALOUD!
My mum often looks at me strangely when I read your poems because she cannot understand this accent at all.

Keep posting!!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from judy corcoran

Excellent

just love
'An' his wee dangly bit has cut its dash,
oanly does its natural duty an' noo nuthin' rash'

'This wee lad Wis a Scot of course'
- lol - i believe that only.... as our aussie guys are not uncouth like that at all :)

funny write alex
- and as usual - nothing to crit
- i enjoyed this, thanks for sharing

love judy

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from Yvette Wilson

Excellent

I enjoyed this much better listening to you do it, even if it is talking about farts. I especially enjoyed how you read the flow. I also liked how you were holding back from laughing as you read it. I wasn't able to find the word frae in your vernacular to see what it means. I did get that he was very talented!LOL

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011

Sorry about that Bonny lass
Frae = from.
Thanks for the great and brammer review Yvette Bonny Lass.
The Auld Yin.
PS. Jings Lass I think Yvette is such a gorgeous romantic sounding name:)

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

Glad to say that I didn't need any interpretation, being 'brung' up in Glasgow. This was hilarious and it was so nice listening to you read it instead of having to go into spell check mode, and stumble over the content. Well done!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from wiljacro

Excellent

HI! Alex.You can mke me laugh as often as the young lad in your latest Poem could fart. It is always a pleasure to read your tales they are so varied and always very, very funny and the dialect ,for me, adds to the authenticity of the story and to the humour. More, please! wiljacro.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I Believe and the Brigadoon theme - at least he had good musical taste. LOL
I like the alliteration in one of the wonders
As always, strong rhyming couplets and good steady cadence which always sounds great read aloud
Whistling Annie Get Your Gun from I'm not going to mention where - now that is a talent I've never even heard of. LOL
What a sad, sad accident ;-)
Funny stuff, Alex :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011

Comment from Sweet Anita

Excellent

Ahh.. I'm finally gettin' to see that bathroom humor you've been warnin us about. This guy should get on 'America's Got Talent'. He'd win for sure! LOL Thanks for givin' me a few laughs this mornin' ye auld yin.

Nita

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2011