Thaddeus Turtle
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Comment from Carolyn 12
This is so cute. The characters are believeable and fun reading about. So did Thaddeus bring back a girlfriend and have a turtle family? Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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This is so cute. The characters are believeable and fun reading about. So did Thaddeus bring back a girlfriend and have a turtle family? Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Carolyn, I'm so happy that you enjoyed this little story. I have in mind a 3 book series about Thaddeus written for children. Haven't begun that project yet. I already have 3 or 4 stories/poems started and I need to finish something before I start another. livelylinda
Comment from MizKat
livelylinda - This story about Thaddeus is so cute. I really enjoyed reading about this real turtle and his adventures. Kat
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livelylinda - This story about Thaddeus is so cute. I really enjoyed reading about this real turtle and his adventures. Kat
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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MizKat, I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story. Linda
Comment from Darla9
This is a very sweet story and I really enjoyed the little note from Otto at the end. I think this is the first time ever I read something from turtle's point of view ;) good job
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This is a very sweet story and I really enjoyed the little note from Otto at the end. I think this is the first time ever I read something from turtle's point of view ;) good job
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Glad that you enjoyed this story. livelylinda
Comment from Maxxx
love this turtle's tale! he is wise and cheerful, and an optimist at heart despite the perilous existence of his life! this is a great little tale told from your turtle's viewpoint, and i'm down in that grass with him, avoiding predators and 'running' around the meadow! love his friend the otter too! i can almost see the cheery way he lives his life in the water! great read!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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love this turtle's tale! he is wise and cheerful, and an optimist at heart despite the perilous existence of his life! this is a great little tale told from your turtle's viewpoint, and i'm down in that grass with him, avoiding predators and 'running' around the meadow! love his friend the otter too! i can almost see the cheery way he lives his life in the water! great read!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this story. livelylinda
Comment from Little Orphan
Love it, so cute! The thing that made it for me was Otto's note in the end. And I actually know someone named Thaddeus. And my old neighbors had a turtle. (Or a tortoise, I think.) Very sweet, thank you!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Love it, so cute! The thing that made it for me was Otto's note in the end. And I actually know someone named Thaddeus. And my old neighbors had a turtle. (Or a tortoise, I think.) Very sweet, thank you!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from alexisleech
A very sweet story incorporating a lot of imagination! I love the imagery of cars being the masters' of humans. I think you have probably pointed a few things out, from a small creatures point of view, that we humans wouldn't even think about. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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A very sweet story incorporating a lot of imagination! I love the imagery of cars being the masters' of humans. I think you have probably pointed a few things out, from a small creatures point of view, that we humans wouldn't even think about. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading, Alexis. Linda
Comment from jadapenn
Very interesting travels the boy has. I like the way he jogs. Quite the sportsman. Wonder how big the stopwatch is to clock his times. lol. Look forward to more adventures with the new missus. Well written. luv jada
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Very interesting travels the boy has. I like the way he jogs. Quite the sportsman. Wonder how big the stopwatch is to clock his times. lol. Look forward to more adventures with the new missus. Well written. luv jada
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading. Linda
Comment from c_lucas
Life from the pov of a turtle. This is a very creative adventure. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Life from the pov of a turtle. This is a very creative adventure. It is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thank you, C, for reading and commenting. Linda
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You're welcome, Linda. Charlie
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, livelylinda, a great job writing this little turtle story. you gave him an excellent voice. i used to see these in the trails where we walked....
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this is very well written, livelylinda, a great job writing this little turtle story. you gave him an excellent voice. i used to see these in the trails where we walked....
Comment Written 30-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thanks for reading, sweetwood. livelylinda
Comment from Sweet Anita
Thaddeus has an interesting life. He is a fast mover in winning his lady love, Thelma. I hope they don't get hit on the Great Wide Way coming home. :o) I found a couple of little spags.
I am actualy lucky (actually)
There was enough long grasses in the clearing ( there were enough long grasses)
if one should wonder in (wander in)
I take a deep breath and leep (leap)
Cute idea, telling the story from a turtle's point of view.
Nice job.
Nita :-)
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Thaddeus has an interesting life. He is a fast mover in winning his lady love, Thelma. I hope they don't get hit on the Great Wide Way coming home. :o) I found a couple of little spags.
I am actualy lucky (actually)
There was enough long grasses in the clearing ( there were enough long grasses)
if one should wonder in (wander in)
I take a deep breath and leep (leap)
Cute idea, telling the story from a turtle's point of view.
Nice job.
Nita :-)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2011
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2011
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Sweet Anita, thanks for reading and pointing out my little errors. I will fix them today. Linda
