Spring Sun
Soak up the sunshine31 total reviews
Comment from fluffnstuff
Hey there...nice write! Have been thinking about you and wondering why I haven't heard from you. a litle concerned. check your messages. loves ya fluffer
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
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Hey there...nice write! Have been thinking about you and wondering why I haven't heard from you. a litle concerned. check your messages. loves ya fluffer
Comment Written 08-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2011
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Hi Di! THank you very very much! I am back online and hope to get busy asap. LOTS to do, finally settled in a house. HOPEFULLY it will be okay here.At least for a while. Pray pray. ")) I hope you are doing okay Diane. I have not forgotten you...LOVE, Susan
Comment from anne1204
Just got back on Fanstory. I have been changing jobs and moving my mothers things. Exhausting month. You are still writing lovely poetry. This is a very nice haiku. Hope you are moved and settled. Keep in touch. Anne
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Just got back on Fanstory. I have been changing jobs and moving my mothers things. Exhausting month. You are still writing lovely poetry. This is a very nice haiku. Hope you are moved and settled. Keep in touch. Anne
Comment Written 24-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi Anne~ Thank you very much~ What a kind and most welcome review! I am always thrilled when you enjoy what I try to do. I have been off here for weeks myself...and will be back at it soon I hope!~ I do miss all the fun! ") Thank you again, this six is a real thrill. HUGS!! Susan
Comment from Carrie Smith
Good to see you back, Suse! Lovely Haiku expressing what we all seek...that peaceful feeling that all is right in our world. If only it could be,lol! Loved the soft colors you used and loved this write and love you! xoxoSusan.
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Good to see you back, Suse! Lovely Haiku expressing what we all seek...that peaceful feeling that all is right in our world. If only it could be,lol! Loved the soft colors you used and loved this write and love you! xoxoSusan.
Comment Written 23-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi Susan!! I got your message!~ I will call you tomorrow or the next day. You are the kindest friend. I love and miss you too, and thank you so much for this wonderful review too! ")) HUGS and much love!! Susan
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Good Suse! We sure need to catch up! I'll look forward to talking to you. If you get a chance check out my new post - at last...love you! xoxoSusan
Comment from Angelite
Hi
Lovely poem, beautiful picture chosen to represent the words and feelings of the sun light rising to put the night souls back to rest.
best of luck in the contest
and welcome back, long time no hear.
Angel
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi
Lovely poem, beautiful picture chosen to represent the words and feelings of the sun light rising to put the night souls back to rest.
best of luck in the contest
and welcome back, long time no hear.
Angel
Comment Written 22-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi Angel~ Thank you so much~ I am just happy to have you like this. I wrote it too quickly, but wanted to express how I was feeling at the time! I hope to get caught up with your work soon Angel! I miss you and thanks again for this great review! Luv!~~ Susan
Comment from Minglement
I really enjoyed this lovely, tranquil entry for the haiku contest. I love this poem form and you've used it well to paint a lovely word picture, a glimpse at that tranqulity that I too, long for. Take care - Marcia
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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I really enjoyed this lovely, tranquil entry for the haiku contest. I love this poem form and you've used it well to paint a lovely word picture, a glimpse at that tranqulity that I too, long for. Take care - Marcia
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 25-May-2011
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Hi Marcia! Oh thank you!~ I am thrilled to hear from you. I have found a house...so lots to do. I have been in a motel for over six weeks. AWFUL! BUT I have my cat with me, so I survive!~ ")) Thank you for this kind and welcome review.~ HUG~ Susan
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It was soo good to see you posting! I'm so glad you're going to be able to settle in somewhere. Yeah! Hang in there. Hugs, Marcia
Comment from donnadiann
Nothing like the sun to sooth. And after our Alabama storms that left a great number without power; it was so compelling to stay in the sun and light as long as possible, because then it was into candlelight for most, and early to bed. The sun helped with the gloom that hung over the state, but it was the SON, that really helped. And just think, your poem of few words stimulated all this comment:) Nice poem.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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Nothing like the sun to sooth. And after our Alabama storms that left a great number without power; it was so compelling to stay in the sun and light as long as possible, because then it was into candlelight for most, and early to bed. The sun helped with the gloom that hung over the state, but it was the SON, that really helped. And just think, your poem of few words stimulated all this comment:) Nice poem.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2011
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HI Donna, I apologize for this late reply and really appreciate your review! I love what you have written for me! Beautiful thoughts. ")) xoxo, susan
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You are so welcome. Have a happy writing week!
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You too! ")) Smiles...susan
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:)too!
Comment from l.raven
Love your poem.The picture is just beautiful.I am so glad that Spring has finally sprung.We were still in the 30s two nights ago.But the day is getting warmer.great job
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Love your poem.The picture is just beautiful.I am so glad that Spring has finally sprung.We were still in the 30s two nights ago.But the day is getting warmer.great job
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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Hi Raven...thank you so much. I am so sorry for this late reply. I moved shortly after posting this and am just now back. I am always happy to see your name in my list! ")) Susan
Comment from nancyjam
This is a lovely Haiku that paints
a serene picture in the mind of the
reader.
It really is soothing, imagining those leaves softly
blowing.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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This is a lovely Haiku that paints
a serene picture in the mind of the
reader.
It really is soothing, imagining those leaves softly
blowing.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2011
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HI Nancy! HUGS and a thousand thanks for this....I hope you will forgive this late reply. I am so glad to hear from you! ")) Susan
Comment from denhagan
This is an excellent little haiku poem, written about the soft morning spring sunshine. Excellent entry for the contest. I enjoyed reading this poem.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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This is an excellent little haiku poem, written about the soft morning spring sunshine. Excellent entry for the contest. I enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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HI there, so sorry for this late reply! JUST back online and really do appreciate this kind review!! Susan
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You're welcome, Dennis
Comment from heyjude
Realist, I love the thought you've portrayed here. It is a
beautifully serene scene that you've painted with your words.
A beautiful picture you found to go with it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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Realist, I love the thought you've portrayed here. It is a
beautifully serene scene that you've painted with your words.
A beautiful picture you found to go with it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-May-2011
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2011
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HI Jude! Thank you! SOOoo sorry for this late reply...just getting back online! I appreciate this! Susan
