For the Birds
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Female Cardinal"Poems about those winged gifts from above.
15 total reviews
Comment from oozer
Excuse me but my 6 stars have already gone... Exquisitley written. Oh how i envy the writer's talent.. I find the beauty of this piece so very calming. I have to decided on this note to end my day's labour. And so to bed!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Excuse me but my 6 stars have already gone... Exquisitley written. Oh how i envy the writer's talent.. I find the beauty of this piece so very calming. I have to decided on this note to end my day's labour. And so to bed!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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I am glad this poem enhanced your day. I am honored by your comments. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from pnkglo
Your poem is written in an interesting manner. I liked the theme of your writing because I like birds too. Also I've often wondered why God made the male cardinal such a beautiful red and the female brown. No doubt there is a reason for doing this. Thank you so much for your lovely poem,
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Your poem is written in an interesting manner. I liked the theme of your writing because I like birds too. Also I've often wondered why God made the male cardinal such a beautiful red and the female brown. No doubt there is a reason for doing this. Thank you so much for your lovely poem,
Comment Written 14-Nov-2011
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2011
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Yes,I often wondered the same thing, he is so bright but I lvoe her red beak. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Enchanted Pen
Pretty. It's clear that you have a love of nature, or atleast of cardinals. It is beautiful how you point out that the simplest of things are all creations of God, and that they are amazing. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Pretty. It's clear that you have a love of nature, or atleast of cardinals. It is beautiful how you point out that the simplest of things are all creations of God, and that they are amazing. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2011
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Thanks for your encouraging review. Elaine
Comment from Janie King
Very pleasant and fun poem to read and the picture of the birds are esquisite...only God could create such a beautiful creature. I love the little humming bird too. God bless.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2011
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Very pleasant and fun poem to read and the picture of the birds are esquisite...only God could create such a beautiful creature. I love the little humming bird too. God bless.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2011
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2011
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from nancyjam
I love the picture - love Cardinals too.
Your poem speaks of your admiration
for this very special bird and how it
"entices you to the natural world"
Nice flow to your free verse - very descriptive with
clear images.
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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I love the picture - love Cardinals too.
Your poem speaks of your admiration
for this very special bird and how it
"entices you to the natural world"
Nice flow to your free verse - very descriptive with
clear images.
Comment Written 29-May-2011
reply by the author on 30-May-2011
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Thanks for enjoying. I appreciate your great review. Elaine
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-the cardinal is my favorite bird too but you inform the reader that the female cardinal is brown with a red beak and the state of Virginia has the cardinal but I can say that I have never seen a female red birs--I found this poem to very informative--great job.
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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You have good imagery and a good flow with your poem-the cardinal is my favorite bird too but you inform the reader that the female cardinal is brown with a red beak and the state of Virginia has the cardinal but I can say that I have never seen a female red birs--I found this poem to very informative--great job.
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thanks for reviewing and reading about this lovely bird. The female cardinals near my house is a brown bird with a red beak. Thanks again. Elaine
Comment from ashjung2
The picture illustrates the poem well. I was a bit confused by the "but" in the first verse - why not an "and" with "follow you "as," etc.? The last verse needs more introduction, in my opinion, and some explanation of the allure. I liked the impression left by the poem as a whole.
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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The picture illustrates the poem well. I was a bit confused by the "but" in the first verse - why not an "and" with "follow you "as," etc.? The last verse needs more introduction, in my opinion, and some explanation of the allure. I liked the impression left by the poem as a whole.
Comment Written 16-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thanks for reviewing. Elaine
Comment from LateBloomer
hello mermaids,
i enjoyed reading this delightful poem. i, too, am in awe of the cardinal and its beauty. i know spring is here when the cardinal arrives.
this poem reads and flows well. i particularly liked the following:
your red beak
may attract a mate
but I follow you
an exquisite entity
of nature
(this is exactly how if feel too. in my own howm, i roam from room to room following the cardinal's flight.)
a beautiful poem. regards, LateBloomer
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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hello mermaids,
i enjoyed reading this delightful poem. i, too, am in awe of the cardinal and its beauty. i know spring is here when the cardinal arrives.
this poem reads and flows well. i particularly liked the following:
your red beak
may attract a mate
but I follow you
an exquisite entity
of nature
(this is exactly how if feel too. in my own howm, i roam from room to room following the cardinal's flight.)
a beautiful poem. regards, LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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The female cardinal is my favorite bird, she is just such a beauty. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mermaids, a great job writing this poem about the cardinal, i loved reading this and the picture you used was just beautiful. full of imagery
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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this is very well written, mermaids, a great job writing this poem about the cardinal, i loved reading this and the picture you used was just beautiful. full of imagery
Comment Written 15-May-2011
reply by the author on 16-May-2011
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Thanks for reading about this beautiful bird. Elaine
Comment from mumsyone
I enjoyed reading this poem for review. The cardinal is one of my favorite birds, as it was my husband's, who was pretty good at imitating their call. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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I enjoyed reading this poem for review. The cardinal is one of my favorite birds, as it was my husband's, who was pretty good at imitating their call. Great poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-May-2011
reply by the author on 14-May-2011
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I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Elaine
