Precious Moment
When love happens17 total reviews
Comment from Gungalo
Pretty pretty write you. Nice emotions and wonderful words. I enjoyed this little one!!! Wonderful emotions put in just a few words!!!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
Pretty pretty write you. Nice emotions and wonderful words. I enjoyed this little one!!! Wonderful emotions put in just a few words!!!
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Hi. It is so kind of you to review my old work!I wondered why you called me poet :) Thank you so much!
Best wishes, Amyna
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Because you are also a poet, you!!!!
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You are very encouraging. I am humbled by such generosity. I'm hardly a poet compared to you. Thank you so much.
Luv, Amyna
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You ARE a poet, Amyna!!!! We are all different, that's all. Keep writing you!!!
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Right now I am trying desperately to write n nothing comes to mind :(
Thank you so much for your encouraging words, which mean a lot.
Luv, Amyna
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Don't try so hard you. Just sit down and start to write anything. Let it just flow from you with no reason at all. You'll see some awesome free verse come spilling out then!!!
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I really am touched and appreciate...
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Much appreciated and am very touched...
Comment from nelias nhac
This captures so well that moment of understanding that passes between two people without any of the excess speech that so often amounts to nothing... a beautiful 15 words...
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
This captures so well that moment of understanding that passes between two people without any of the excess speech that so often amounts to nothing... a beautiful 15 words...
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your kind comments, and the stars...
Comment from Ntorious
short and sweet.
Although short it speaks a thousand words. Your heart quickens and no words spoken still says something.
Strong emotions projected.
I think if you add a picture it will add to the poem
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
short and sweet.
Although short it speaks a thousand words. Your heart quickens and no words spoken still says something.
Strong emotions projected.
I think if you add a picture it will add to the poem
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for the lovely review and stars. Also for your suggestion. I still don't know how to add a picture!
Best wishes, Amyna
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oh, you have to do it before you being writinf. It will show at the top of the page. Get from fanart or your computer. Then you will browse the pictures then load up
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OK, thanks a lot. Will try next time. Luv n best wishes, Amyna
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ok. thank you and you too,
Comment from joannesnow
How sweet and beautifully stated. You used fourteen words to create an entire story. Very enjoyable.My favorite image, "heartbeats quicken." Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
How sweet and beautifully stated. You used fourteen words to create an entire story. Very enjoyable.My favorite image, "heartbeats quicken." Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for the lovely review and good wishes. Best wishes to you, Amyna
Comment from l.raven
This is a small romantic poem.Has a special feeling to it.Years ago I dated a guy that we never spoke to much.We just looked at each other and know what we were saying.It's such a loving feeling.very nice
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
This is a small romantic poem.Has a special feeling to it.Years ago I dated a guy that we never spoke to much.We just looked at each other and know what we were saying.It's such a loving feeling.very nice
Comment Written 11-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2010
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I'm so glad you liked my little poem, and it brought back happy memories... Thank you very much for the stars and kind words of encouragement.
Comment from Mari_
Short and to the point. I liked this love poem Amyna. Maybe change the first line to 'My heartbeat quickens' - moving the 's'. Maybe also add a picture. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
Short and to the point. I liked this love poem Amyna. Maybe change the first line to 'My heartbeat quickens' - moving the 's'. Maybe also add a picture. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your comments and suggestions. Also for the five stars. I still haven't managed to add a picture to anything...
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Your poem displays an even rhythm. I like the rhyme pattern. It's interesting, using it to frame the thought. So much can be said without any words. Good work.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
Your poem displays an even rhythm. I like the rhyme pattern. It's interesting, using it to frame the thought. So much can be said without any words. Good work.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your comments and stars. Encouragement is always inspiring.
Comment from sweetsilversong
A lovely poem, Amyna.
So few words but painting a beautiful picture.
Exchanging feelings with no words spoken, a line that says such a lot.
Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good one.
SSS
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
A lovely poem, Amyna.
So few words but painting a beautiful picture.
Exchanging feelings with no words spoken, a line that says such a lot.
Thank you for sharing.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a good one.
SSS
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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Thank you so much for your lovely review and stars, SSS;
Best wishes, Amyna
Comment from The Stranger
oh I can see the love in your eys as my heart dances to the tune of romance!A lovely little reminder of what christmas is about...love
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
oh I can see the love in your eys as my heart dances to the tune of romance!A lovely little reminder of what christmas is about...love
Comment Written 06-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2010
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Thank you very much for a wonderful review, and the five stars...
All the best and love, Amyna
Comment from Jetco
Hi Amyna...long time no see. I really liked your short poem. It was so short I could read it twice without blinking. Good luck in contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
Hi Amyna...long time no see. I really liked your short poem. It was so short I could read it twice without blinking. Good luck in contest.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2010
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Hi Jim. Thank you so much. I'm overwhelmed... It was something I did on the spur of the moment.
I have been travelling these last three months, so have not been able to write although I still try to read!
A most humble thanks again.
All the best, Amyna