Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Golden Treasure"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
56 total reviews
Comment from Clockwise
Sings like a song and is bright as the yellow background. This is a very nice poem. Reminds me of the many I've read in religious publications.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Sings like a song and is bright as the yellow background. This is a very nice poem. Reminds me of the many I've read in religious publications.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you Clockwise for such a wonderful reaction to my poem. It really means a lot to me. Gudbjorg
Comment from denhagan
This is a very beautiful and uplifting, inspirational poem, written in the quatrain style with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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This is a very beautiful and uplifting, inspirational poem, written in the quatrain style with great rhythm and rhyming throughout the poem. Nice picture.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2013
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Thank you for reviewing my poem and the beauty in
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You're welcome,
Dennis
Comment from anabellapongasi
This is a lovely spiritual piece. Very nicely written, flows well, in strong rhyming couplets. I love the message, my favorite part is the concluding lines:
But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true. Amen!
Great job:)
Anabella
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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This is a lovely spiritual piece. Very nicely written, flows well, in strong rhyming couplets. I love the message, my favorite part is the concluding lines:
But greater is He that dwells in you
the King of glory, lovely and true. Amen!
Great job:)
Anabella
Comment Written 01-May-2011
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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Thank you Anabella for your wonderful reply to my poem. Glad you like it.
Comment from chita
You have good imagery and good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion about having Faith in God and you inspire the reader to know that this is a treasure--I like where you write(Treasure your faith above all else-in your heart God's Love still dwells) what a inspirational poem to read this Sunday morning--well done.
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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You have good imagery and good rhythm and rhyme all through your poem-you are descriptive and write with emotion about having Faith in God and you inspire the reader to know that this is a treasure--I like where you write(Treasure your faith above all else-in your heart God's Love still dwells) what a inspirational poem to read this Sunday morning--well done.
Comment Written 01-May-2011
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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Thank you Chita for your wonderful review. I love it.
Comment from Kingsland
The true power and glory of His hand lies within us all. Turn from greed and arrogance. Put love and compassion in your mind heart and soul, and then His hand lies within yours. There is nothing to it, but to do it. All the answer that we seek are there if only we are willing to accept them... John
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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The true power and glory of His hand lies within us all. Turn from greed and arrogance. Put love and compassion in your mind heart and soul, and then His hand lies within yours. There is nothing to it, but to do it. All the answer that we seek are there if only we are willing to accept them... John
Comment Written 01-May-2011
reply by the author on 01-May-2011
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Heartfelt yes to that! All we need to do is put our will to work and do what the Master says and accept His Words and do them! Thank you for replying to me poem. Sarah
Comment from adewpearl
your quatrains have a good cadence and strong rhyming couplets.
I like the G words scattered throughout the poem that seem to tie it all together - glory/give/golden/God
This is a beautifully spiritual poem of faith. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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your quatrains have a good cadence and strong rhyming couplets.
I like the G words scattered throughout the poem that seem to tie it all together - glory/give/golden/God
This is a beautifully spiritual poem of faith. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2011
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Thank you Brooke for your very helpful and encouraging review. I'm greatly honoured.
Comment from VicToria76
I am not a usual reader of poetry although I must admit this poem really drew me in from the first word to the last. It flowed so easily making it great to read. Well done.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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I am not a usual reader of poetry although I must admit this poem really drew me in from the first word to the last. It flowed so easily making it great to read. Well done.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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This is a wonderful review VicToria. Glad to hear you enjoyed reading my poem in this way...
Comment from Harlequin
A nicely rhyming nice poem. Good choice of picture. ; )
Your chosen theme is touched me and made me feel less unworthy. Writing about Love is always a good choice since this word can mean a great variety of things.
Well done and thank you for sharing. : )
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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A nicely rhyming nice poem. Good choice of picture. ; )
Your chosen theme is touched me and made me feel less unworthy. Writing about Love is always a good choice since this word can mean a great variety of things.
Well done and thank you for sharing. : )
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you Petrarch for your wonderful review, it especially touched me hearing my poem made you less unworthy. God's love is always uplifting and encouraging, it builds up! I think your poems a beautiful...
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Thanks for your kind reply. : )
Comment from Fireshadow
wherever we go, we leave a trend,
that follows us to the very end!
Sarah, these are very wise words, indeed. I enjoyed this beautiful poem where you deep faith and spirituality shine through every word. I agree that God dwells within each one of us. Very good work, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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wherever we go, we leave a trend,
that follows us to the very end!
Sarah, these are very wise words, indeed. I enjoyed this beautiful poem where you deep faith and spirituality shine through every word. I agree that God dwells within each one of us. Very good work, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you for your marvellous review, and having grown spiritually is really what matters most to me, the eternal treasures. Much love, Sarah
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Poet and that was certainly inspiring and alsoso wonderfully true. Thank God! I wish you the very best in your work, I enjoyed, Loyd
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Hello Poet and that was certainly inspiring and alsoso wonderfully true. Thank God! I wish you the very best in your work, I enjoyed, Loyd
Comment Written 14-Dec-2010
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2010
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Thank you Loyd C Taylor, Sr for your wonderful review, I'm glad it inspired your heart. Sarah
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You are very welcome.
I wish you would check out the writing prompt "The Christmas Card Box" and enter it for me. Would you check it out?
Thanks, LOyd
