Alphabetic cruelty!
Life Without the Letter S20 total reviews
Comment from nora arjuna
hi there kiwi, a great poem without the alphabet S. i like this part most:
Whoever thought that there could be
A giant gulf 'tween 'R' and 'T'?
good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2011
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hi there kiwi, a great poem without the alphabet S. i like this part most:
Whoever thought that there could be
A giant gulf 'tween 'R' and 'T'?
good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2011
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2011
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I may have misled you - this was for a previous incarnation of this contest.
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yeah, the thought did cross me cos i could see your author name. :)
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
this poem is fun too, and i imagine it was somewhat fun to write as well despite the obvious difficulties. well ,done im glad i stopped by.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2011
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this poem is fun too, and i imagine it was somewhat fun to write as well despite the obvious difficulties. well ,done im glad i stopped by.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2011
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This was for a contest some time ago - yes, life without the letter S is tough
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Poet,
I know how hard it must have been to write this poem without the letter S. Having said that you did a marvelous job. I like the words the rhyme and the content. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Hi Poet,
I know how hard it must have been to write this poem without the letter S. Having said that you did a marvelous job. I like the words the rhyme and the content. Well done and good luck in the contest. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - it was a fun challenge.
Comment from ImJLAD
I like where you went with this one. Losing a letter in the alphabet commonly used can be tricky. Your use of rhymes were creative and fun. Nice Job.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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I like where you went with this one. Losing a letter in the alphabet commonly used can be tricky. Your use of rhymes were creative and fun. Nice Job.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - it was difficult but fun
Comment from heyjude
mystery poet, what a great entry for the contest of writing
a poem without the letter S. That must be difficult, but you
succeeded. I really enjoyed this. It's a good entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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mystery poet, what a great entry for the contest of writing
a poem without the letter S. That must be difficult, but you
succeeded. I really enjoyed this. It's a good entry for the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - the competition is fierce I think
Comment from Slythytove2
And you did very well at it. The old omitted letter prompt is good for it will make you look harder to find an equally good alphabetic remainder word. I think I'm getting the hang of the content here. Got to go- good luck with future work.
(no"S"s)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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And you did very well at it. The old omitted letter prompt is good for it will make you look harder to find an equally good alphabetic remainder word. I think I'm getting the hang of the content here. Got to go- good luck with future work.
(no"S"s)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thanks
Comment from humpwhistle
This just goes to show that you don't need "s" to create great poetry. There is no "s" in poetry, right? Really, nice job under very StreSSful conditions. Best of luck with the contest. PeaSe, Lee
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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This just goes to show that you don't need "s" to create great poetry. There is no "s" in poetry, right? Really, nice job under very StreSSful conditions. Best of luck with the contest. PeaSe, Lee
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thank you - it was challenging but fun too
Comment from Tushy
I loved this ... so hard to write this poem. I had a go but failed miserably. This is the most successful one I have read. Technically it is good, it's original and funny too. Excellent.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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I loved this ... so hard to write this poem. I had a go but failed miserably. This is the most successful one I have read. Technically it is good, it's original and funny too. Excellent.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thanks for your kind words - lets see if the voters agree!
Comment from whispersofthesoul
I love the way you have wrote it is not easy to write without one of the commonest letters yet in your writing you totally contradict yourself, you make it look so easy especially with your humour. Welldone.
Goodluck
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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I love the way you have wrote it is not easy to write without one of the commonest letters yet in your writing you totally contradict yourself, you make it look so easy especially with your humour. Welldone.
Goodluck
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thanks!
Comment from Sally Carter
Nicely done, Mystery Writer! I have tried this contest myself in the past, so I know it's not easy.
I enjoyed your rather charming, somewhat archaic language in this poem. It was consistent throughout and works really well.
"Key" letter is clever! Hey, did you see what I did there!
Neat rhymes, including some internal ones, and an all round super entry. Good luck with it.
Sally
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Nicely done, Mystery Writer! I have tried this contest myself in the past, so I know it's not easy.
I enjoyed your rather charming, somewhat archaic language in this poem. It was consistent throughout and works really well.
"Key" letter is clever! Hey, did you see what I did there!
Neat rhymes, including some internal ones, and an all round super entry. Good luck with it.
Sally
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2010
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Thanks for your review
