We don't need to use those 'S' word
Contest Entry4 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
What a wonderful tribute to enduring love, Marijke - old and wrinkled and still can't get enough of each other - that is fantastic - I went looking to see if you had posted as I've not heard from you lately - glad I found this :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
What a wonderful tribute to enduring love, Marijke - old and wrinkled and still can't get enough of each other - that is fantastic - I went looking to see if you had posted as I've not heard from you lately - glad I found this :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2010
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Hi Brooke, thank you. I have not been on FS for a while, been very busy. Am currently on holidays with Holland family. Life should get back to normal in the next couple of weeks (I hope). Hope you are well. Warmest regards, Marijke
Comment from missy98writer
Mystery Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. Lovely art work and presentation. Your words paint a picture in the readers head. Marvelous use of metaphors such as interlude with my man, private hide-away, making each other happy, can't get enough, and long-term commitment. Your poem is about an older couple still in love and isn't it grand. Your poem is an excellent entry in the writing prompt contest. I wish you good luck in the contest. I was a delight to read your poetic art.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
Mystery Poet,
your poem is beautifully written. Lovely art work and presentation. Your words paint a picture in the readers head. Marvelous use of metaphors such as interlude with my man, private hide-away, making each other happy, can't get enough, and long-term commitment. Your poem is about an older couple still in love and isn't it grand. Your poem is an excellent entry in the writing prompt contest. I wish you good luck in the contest. I was a delight to read your poetic art.
Melissa.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
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Thank you, Melissa, for your lovely comments and review.
Warmest regards.
Comment from highlander104
This is a wonderful story of love everlasting. This how I wish the whole world could be. Good write and I wish you luck in the contest.
Jean K.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
This is a wonderful story of love everlasting. This how I wish the whole world could be. Good write and I wish you luck in the contest.
Jean K.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
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Thank you, Jean, for your lovely comments and review.
Warmest regards.
Comment from Magics02
I think you did a Spectacular job in not using the s letter in this poem and I liked how it read and what it said to me:) Good luck in the contest poet:) magics
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
I think you did a Spectacular job in not using the s letter in this poem and I liked how it read and what it said to me:) Good luck in the contest poet:) magics
Comment Written 20-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2010
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Thank you, magics, for your lovely comments and review.
Warmest regards.
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You are so very welcome poet:)