Dear Life
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Dear Mood"Addressing different themes in a form of a letter
22 total reviews
Comment from jack silver
perfectly written. well crafted. so true. we each have a mood that makes us move to its own dance like a puppet caught on strings. we each have our own desire to control it.
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
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perfectly written. well crafted. so true. we each have a mood that makes us move to its own dance like a puppet caught on strings. we each have our own desire to control it.
Comment Written 03-May-2010
reply by the author on 07-May-2010
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Hi Jack,
All those shining stars are for me?Wow. Thank you so much, I really appreciate your encouragement. I am glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
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Hello. they are all for you. If I had been able to add a sixth one I would have. By the way would you like to have a preview of something I will be sending in
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Sure, why not?
Comment from Just2Write
Now that's what I've been waiting for. A letter. You do these so well, Pupa. I really enjoy these little missives you send to your soul. Great writing, and gret perspective. Moods do seem to have control over us, but we can combat them with Vitamin B, and better food choices. Sometimes a walk or change of plans can make all the difference too. As you say - you wear the crown. Moods can can be wonderful. Its just the gloomy ones that need the kick in the slats. Rose.
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Now that's what I've been waiting for. A letter. You do these so well, Pupa. I really enjoy these little missives you send to your soul. Great writing, and gret perspective. Moods do seem to have control over us, but we can combat them with Vitamin B, and better food choices. Sometimes a walk or change of plans can make all the difference too. As you say - you wear the crown. Moods can can be wonderful. Its just the gloomy ones that need the kick in the slats. Rose.
Comment Written 02-May-2010
reply by the author on 02-May-2010
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Rose, it is thanks to you that I wrote this. You reminded me of my book 'Dear Life'.
Now all these stars, thanks a million, very generous of you and most appreciated.
Love
Pupa
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Then, I'm happy today, for you really shine in this genre. Loved it.
Comment from LovnPeace
I like this a lot PUPA. I like the style also. I believe what you say here and then there are times I just give in to the blues. They can be so powerful and painful. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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I like this a lot PUPA. I like the style also. I believe what you say here and then there are times I just give in to the blues. They can be so powerful and painful. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 01-May-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Thank you so much Barbara, this is very generous of you. I appreciate your comments and rating very much.
Love
Pupa
Comment from fionageorge
Pupa, this is a powerful and great message within a poem, which flows freely, and has good rhythm and rhyme. But more importantly, it conveys emotions and the strength of character to realise to take back one's power.
One small criticism, the 'Background' is unreadable, due to the colour of the font.
Warmest regards,
Marijke
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Pupa, this is a powerful and great message within a poem, which flows freely, and has good rhythm and rhyme. But more importantly, it conveys emotions and the strength of character to realise to take back one's power.
One small criticism, the 'Background' is unreadable, due to the colour of the font.
Warmest regards,
Marijke
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 01-May-2010
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Sorry about the dark backround, Marijke. Your comments are very encouraging and most appreciated. I am glad you liked my poem.
Love
Pupa
Comment from babylonia
pupa,
this is the same thing i have to do every morning. LOL most mornings it works and sometimes ... LOL we all have those days. glad to see you here and hope this is a good day.
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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pupa,
this is the same thing i have to do every morning. LOL most mornings it works and sometimes ... LOL we all have those days. glad to see you here and hope this is a good day.
love,
barbara
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Hello dear Friend,
Thanks for reviewing my 'mood'!I have been away for such a long time, glad to be back.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Dall
HA! That's what you think, try as you might it always get's the upper hand. Though you smile, and try to be happy, when the old mood swings start to fly, it's hard to get the thing under control. I liked this very much, being the moody woman that I am.. Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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HA! That's what you think, try as you might it always get's the upper hand. Though you smile, and try to be happy, when the old mood swings start to fly, it's hard to get the thing under control. I liked this very much, being the moody woman that I am.. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Hi Dall, your review reminded me of myself, bubbly and smiling with others, as soon as I arrive home, I am a totally different person!!LOL.
Thanks for reviewing my poem, most appreciated.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Juliette Chamberlain
You have drawn a very exact picture of how moods affect our lives, and determine our outlook.
I like how you take your mood to task and declare that it is you who will dictate the mood, and not the other way round.
Excellent structure and rhyme.
Juliette
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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You have drawn a very exact picture of how moods affect our lives, and determine our outlook.
I like how you take your mood to task and declare that it is you who will dictate the mood, and not the other way round.
Excellent structure and rhyme.
Juliette
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Hi Juliette,
How I ended my poem is still only a wish!~LOL, but the intention is surely there.
Thanks for your encouraging review, most appreciated.
Love
Pupa
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Yes, Pupa, unfortunately I think that is the case with most of us. (sigh)
Love,
Juliette
Comment from adewpearl
The background paragraph cannot be read on my computer without using the highlighter function, but the poem itself is fine.
Monorhyme can so easily sound forced, but you employ it really well in this poem, Pupa.
I especially enjoyed the personification of your mood as the speaker addresses it, and I like the resolve the speaker voices to take control. Brooke :-)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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The background paragraph cannot be read on my computer without using the highlighter function, but the poem itself is fine.
Monorhyme can so easily sound forced, but you employ it really well in this poem, Pupa.
I especially enjoyed the personification of your mood as the speaker addresses it, and I like the resolve the speaker voices to take control. Brooke :-)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Thanks Brooke, always nice to get a review from you. Most appreciated.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Oatmeal
PUPA,
The theme is cute. The flow is nice. This is a very detailed poem. Your descriptive words well chosen. This poem was arranged very well.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no SPAG and no typos.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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PUPA,
The theme is cute. The flow is nice. This is a very detailed poem. Your descriptive words well chosen. This poem was arranged very well.
It's a very clean piece. I saw no SPAG and no typos.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Thanks so much, Oatmeal, your encouragements means a lot to me.
Love
Pupa
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your presentation and the description of moods swings in the form of a letter. (I couldn't read the upper, dark text against the black background on my screen.) Your mono-verse for each "stanza" is quite appealing. I also especially liked your "toy" simile and "town" and "crown" metaphors, along with your "reach the sky" hyperbole.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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I admired your presentation and the description of moods swings in the form of a letter. (I couldn't read the upper, dark text against the black background on my screen.) Your mono-verse for each "stanza" is quite appealing. I also especially liked your "toy" simile and "town" and "crown" metaphors, along with your "reach the sky" hyperbole.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2010
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2010
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Sorry about that dark text, Joan. Thanks for a very encouraging review,it means so much to me.
Love
Pupa
