A Good Idea
A contest entry28 total reviews
Comment from Queenise
I thought this was a very good story and a timely one also. It has great description,pace,flow and imagery. This was enjoyable to read and engaged the reader from the start to finish. Blessings. Queenise
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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I thought this was a very good story and a timely one also. It has great description,pace,flow and imagery. This was enjoyable to read and engaged the reader from the start to finish. Blessings. Queenise
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2010
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review, Your support is much appreciated. I had a good time writing this. Thanks, too, for the great review, the five star rating, and the blessings.
Sandollar
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My pleasure,friend. Peace and lol. Queenise
Comment from K. Suzanne
Infomercials are awful, but this was definitely an enjoyable read. I enjoyed Fenton's chat with the devil. Thanks for brightening up my day. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Infomercials are awful, but this was definitely an enjoyable read. I enjoyed Fenton's chat with the devil. Thanks for brightening up my day. Keep writing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much for the great review and the five star rating. I'm very happy you enjoyed this. I had a great deal of fun writing it. Thanks, too, for the support. It's much appreciated.
Sandollar
Comment from Kashif Ali Abbas
The description and usage of words was truly admirable. The meanings just fly between these powerful sentences through out the story. It is a great contest entry and best of luck in the contest.
K
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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The description and usage of words was truly admirable. The meanings just fly between these powerful sentences through out the story. It is a great contest entry and best of luck in the contest.
K
Comment Written 25-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much for your wonderful review and the great rating. I'm glad you enjoyed this.It was a fun contest. Also,your best wishes for the contest are much appreciated.
Sandollar
Comment from Annmuma
The devil always gets his due, doesn't he. lol. I love this story! Saw no obvious spag and I expect this entry will do well in the contest. I'll check the voting booth. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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The devil always gets his due, doesn't he. lol. I love this story! Saw no obvious spag and I expect this entry will do well in the contest. I'll check the voting booth. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you so much for your great review and the five star rating.
I'm glad you enjoyed this. I had fun with it. Thank you also for the good wishes in the contest. Yes,the devil always manages, doesn't he?
Sandollar
Sandollar
Comment from patmedium
Lovely stuff... a marvellous read. Starts, runs through and finishes excellently. Good luck with this well thought out wee tale. Pat.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Lovely stuff... a marvellous read. Starts, runs through and finishes excellently. Good luck with this well thought out wee tale. Pat.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much for your words of encouragement, the great review and rating. I am so happy you enjoyed this.
Sandollar
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A memorable read. Pat.
Comment from knowledge
Good play on the devil and his deceiving ways. Good post. I like the history lesson in your notes. The art pick looks like me!
Luck on the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Good play on the devil and his deceiving ways. Good post. I like the history lesson in your notes. The art pick looks like me!
Luck on the contest.
Thank You My Friend,
Knowledge
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the great review and five star rating. I thought that photo was perfect for the story. So happy you enjoyed this. Thanks also for the good luck wish in the contest.
Sandollar
Comment from Belinda
So does the muse get the 50 percent commission Fenton makes? Writing ads and infomercials is indeed much, much harder than fiction. This is a good idea, just indicated by your title.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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So does the muse get the 50 percent commission Fenton makes? Writing ads and infomercials is indeed much, much harder than fiction. This is a good idea, just indicated by your title.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the wonderful review and stars. Yes, the devil gets his 50%, but you just know there's going to be a higher price to pay. That's always the way. So happy you enjoyed this. Thanks for reading and your support.
Sandollar
Comment from CKLA
I enjoyed this. You held my attention throughout. It was a very imaginative piece. There were no nits or spags that I could see. Good luck in the contest.
Collette
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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I enjoyed this. You held my attention throughout. It was a very imaginative piece. There were no nits or spags that I could see. Good luck in the contest.
Collette
Comment Written 23-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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Thanks for your great review and five star rating. I'm very happy you enjoyed it. Thanks also for the good wishes in the contest.
Sandollar
Comment from wierdgrace
This is excellent, and enjoyable at the same time, well written for the flash fiction for the contest, I wish you so much in the contest, and found no errors and no revisions, good luck in the voting booth, I will watch for it.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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This is excellent, and enjoyable at the same time, well written for the flash fiction for the contest, I wish you so much in the contest, and found no errors and no revisions, good luck in the voting booth, I will watch for it.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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Thanks so much for your review and rating. I'm happy you enjoyed reading this. Your support is much appreciated.
Sandollar
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u r always welcome
Comment from JW
After reading this story - the first thought I had was, OK - so what happens next? You did a good job in leaving the reader in suspense.
Good story - easy read. No wasted words and no nics.
Jonathon
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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After reading this story - the first thought I had was, OK - so what happens next? You did a good job in leaving the reader in suspense.
Good story - easy read. No wasted words and no nics.
Jonathon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2010
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2010
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Thank you for the positive review and the stars. It is much appreciated. I'm glad I cut it off at the right place. There was an 800 word restriction.
Sandollar
