Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Beyond the Call of Duty"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Beyond the Call of Duty, gives us a reason to look around and realize that all we see is God at work on every mountain, across the valleys, and in every nook and cranny.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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This poem, Beyond the Call of Duty, gives us a reason to look around and realize that all we see is God at work on every mountain, across the valleys, and in every nook and cranny.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for the review of my poem, it was very helpful and inspiring to read, a real treasure.
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter entitled,
"Beyond the call of duty"
Speaks highly in praises are Heavenly Father above when it comes to Creation here on Earth.
The things you post are free for us to enjoy.
In addition, every morning we awake?
That's Another Blessing for us to appreciate!
Well written.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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This chapter entitled,
"Beyond the call of duty"
Speaks highly in praises are Heavenly Father above when it comes to Creation here on Earth.
The things you post are free for us to enjoy.
In addition, every morning we awake?
That's Another Blessing for us to appreciate!
Well written.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 20-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to review my poem and give me such fine reaction.
Appreciate it,
Gb
Comment from Paul McFarland
Again pretty good for a second language. I would like to see you work on the meter a little. It would smooth out the reading quite a bit. This is a great message.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Again pretty good for a second language. I would like to see you work on the meter a little. It would smooth out the reading quite a bit. This is a great message.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem and for input as well. I get these poems largely by inspiration I believe are given from God.
Comment from royowen
Somebody reminded me during the working to do something that I've been taking for granted, to praise Him everyday, whether yesterday had been a good day or not, that every day was a gift. This is beautifully written dear friend, thanks for reminding me. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Somebody reminded me during the working to do something that I've been taking for granted, to praise Him everyday, whether yesterday had been a good day or not, that every day was a gift. This is beautifully written dear friend, thanks for reminding me. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Blessed Roy. Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews they are a real inspiration to me and fun to read and and inspiration and joy to my heat.
With love and appreciation,
Gb
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Bless you GB.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love new days and I am always eager to rise and enjoy them, everyday is a gift we should enjoy and live it to the max, I am always ready for my bed after a busy day though, a fine uplifting write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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I love new days and I am always eager to rise and enjoy them, everyday is a gift we should enjoy and live it to the max, I am always ready for my bed after a busy day though, a fine uplifting write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2021
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Lovely review, honest and true, I really like your write in the reaction as it obviously flows from your heart so wonderfully.
With much love and appreciation,
Gb
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Spiritual Poem speaks your experience of great love of God as He gives us everything to know, feel happy, enjoy, use, every day in and thru Nature and do our duty beyond the love of duty; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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This Spiritual Poem speaks your experience of great love of God as He gives us everything to know, feel happy, enjoy, use, every day in and thru Nature and do our duty beyond the love of duty; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your great review. Beyond the call of duty is like enjoying beauty of life and being on a look out for others who need help. It's really like unconditional love where you delight in giving.
Comment from Pantygynt
A simple poem that demonstrates a natural feeling for both rhyme and rhythm without slavishly following a metrical pattern. The poem's content also demonstrates a strong religious faith.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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A simple poem that demonstrates a natural feeling for both rhyme and rhythm without slavishly following a metrical pattern. The poem's content also demonstrates a strong religious faith.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your fantastic review and a helpful suggestion about the metrical pattern in poetry.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
thank you for a beautiful poem with a wonderful and true message. what did you think about christmas while living in the far east, thinking that wise men could have come from the area you were living at. Merry Christmas
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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thank you for a beautiful poem with a wonderful and true message. what did you think about christmas while living in the far east, thinking that wise men could have come from the area you were living at. Merry Christmas
Comment Written 23-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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Thank you for reviewing my poem, really appreciate your input. Glad you like it.
Comment from dayan1980
I think flowers are a perfect example of love and God. I liked this poem and if I am to judge it on how it made me feel then I would have to say that it was good, but not at a standard to award five stars. In some areas I feel that you have used words just to rhyme and not because that is where they belong.
I hope you don't mind the honest feedback.
Dayan
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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I think flowers are a perfect example of love and God. I liked this poem and if I am to judge it on how it made me feel then I would have to say that it was good, but not at a standard to award five stars. In some areas I feel that you have used words just to rhyme and not because that is where they belong.
I hope you don't mind the honest feedback.
Dayan
Comment Written 23-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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Thank you Dayan for your helpful review on my poem. Well, I'm not surprised it needed so fine tuning as this was one of my first poem I wrote in English, written in 1995.
Comment from Oatmeal
sarahice,
Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged. Very good formatting. Smooth flowing. Understandable. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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sarahice,
Very nicely written work. Perfectly arranged. Very good formatting. Smooth flowing. Understandable. Your descriptive words were very good for explaining your ideas and your feelings.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 23-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2009
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Thank you Oatmeal for your detailed review. I was very helpful and the way you described it. Look forward to seeing you as well. With love and Merry Christmas
